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Question, how do you kill someone with a scooter?
2843089 By going at fourty miles per hour and hitting them with the metal bar thing, that's how.
First 500 word review.
Disclaimer: dark / tragedy, is on my no read list. so I can only comment on basic structure.
Not a lot to say. You have a solid style. You show well, and I had no problems seeing the world you were narrating. Dialogue did feel a bit surreal in places. You could work on getting more emotion into your conversations.
2843089 Going 40 miles an hour while ramming directly in to them.
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Step 1: Get a scooter.
Step 2: go 40mph.
Step 3: hit a bump.
Step 4: hit somepony while landing.
And there thats how you kill somepony with a scooter.
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damn man, that was deep