Braeburn is coming to visit his relatives in Ponyville, but when he arrives at Ponyville, he runs into another pony. Somepony pink. Somepony who loves to party. Somepony who might make him very happy.
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I like muffins and Ponies. Sometimes at the same time.
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I really enjoyed this! We need more BraeburnPie fics.
209286
Preaching to the choir. :) I love BraeburnxPinkie.
PinkieBurn...interesting.
I may not be a shipping writter, but I'd like to point out a thing or two. If Pinkie Pie really liked Braeburn this much (since she exploded into emotion at Sugarcube Corner), wouldn't she have jumped at the chance instead of offering (though this may be her disguising the emotion, but alas I couldn't tell) to meet Braeburn? Also, there was the issue of build up. Maybe if you had hinted a little more before-hoof, perhaps?
Again, I'm not a shipping writter, I just felt it was a little rushed. This was still cleanly written and a very enjoyable tale. 4/5 stars from me!
If you don't make a sequel to this, i will be obliged to set out on a death-defying quest to find my sole purpose on the world.
in other words, i'll start to have a sad face
That was cute
It's a nice sweet fic.
If you like short and sickeningly sweet stories, say "yay!"
If you like the rare and hardly appreciated pairings, say "I!"
If you like cupcakes... I hope you mean the pastry.
Somepony who's pink and loves parties... Hmmm... Rarity?
All jokes aside, that was a nice little one-shot.
This is why we have nice things
Very sweet story
-Glassed
209473 Same here!
Solid 4.5/5 stars from me. Glad to see some nice, sweet stories once in a while. My hat's off to you.
(...See what I did there?)
you didn't make a sequel
you deserved the cry emoticons
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please 
Oh, you with your hard to find innuendos.
Very cute
209286 Ever read Braeburn's Dating Bonanza?
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2262573 No
2262973
It's another good Braeburn x Pinkie story. I recommend it.
It don't my favourite paring, but famn... I love this fanfic
I'll be honest, I didn't like this story too much.
And saying I love you! Isn't that something you say after going out on a few dates? like a month, probably more? Not as soon as you were dating..
Don't get me wrong, I LOVE the concept, it's just, don't you think that built up way too fast? We went from pinkie picking up braeburn to her crying her eyes out over him in a few paragraphs!
BUT
I love the story concept, I love this shipping, and nonetheless, this was a cute lil' story.
3/5!
3877338 I have to agree on a few things. We also have to remember, the author might have a certain way of writing. To me, I'd give this story a 4.5/5.