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ZachTheBrony
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Time to bring on the epic.
Have a mostache my good sir
2676048 Thank you, hope you enjoy it.
So, did Celestia marry Starswirl? Of was she just being a troll?
Also, what happened to the Bearded's wife?
2676078 I have no idea. That little... thing didn't happen, just for comedy purposes.
2676086
Damn.
Good Start, Kratos is a bit tamer than i expected but still excellent read. Plus loved the centaur reference, that was class. And the bit at the end. Keep it up
2676493 Well, y'gotta think. He knows he cannot beat Celestia if he tried again, and he's sick, so it's even lower of a chance. And, following these 'rules' is the only thing that will return him to Olympus, supposedly. So he's trying not to break them... too much.
Nice read, I guess he is more tame but with good reason.
what the fuck i just read?
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WHAT?!
2679615
exactly what I thought.
But very funny
So I am reading this in a hospital waiting room and when he (Kratos) got to the orchard and sh*t went down, I was all like
and all the other people were like 
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Not really a fan of this whole possible KratosXpony thing
I was about to close this browsing session and see you posted a new chapter. I said, "Why the f*ck not?"
The whole fuck Kratos thing needs to be toned down...ALOT
2680986
Me neither
Weird turn... First Twilight, and now AJ?
And what's this gift?
2681486 You'll find out soon.
2681078 Either that or a mature rating.
Drop the sex or I am dropping the story.
MOAR!
Please, tell me something.
Why were these necessary? What did they add to the story? If those are, as I assume, your own personal thoughts on events, that's great, but either keep them to yourself, or use the author's notes. Now, I don't know much about what's encouraged or frowned upon in writing fiction, so I did some research and the general consensus on having a personal, omniscient 3rd person narrator is that it's a bad idea. I think a used named Vertigo on writingforums.com put it best when he said,
2682531 then drop it don't need to read it
2683459 Fixed, I believe.
2680986 If there's one thing I can guarantee you, it's not going to happen.
2681078 Already taken care of, but lighten up. It's goofy sexual humor.
2679615 Lighten up a bit, it's goofy sexual humor. Not going to actually happen, but still.
2682531 I dealt with it, skim through and pick out the major things, like in the orchard, etc.
If I remember correctly, does not Kratos have some of Chronus' blood in him? If he does, that could explain why the more lethal injuries are not killing his mortal form. Like, I don't know, a broken spine, perhaps?
2686998 I think so. I remember Gaia mentioning something about how the Blood of Cronos/Chronos/Kronos (seriously, how the hell do you spell that crap) serving him well in GoW3.
Quick question. Does Kratos have his facial hair back yet?
2687070 Definitely. It would've actually grown... a bit more than he had before. Not a beard, but his previous 'stubble and goatee' would now be a bit longer, and due to them being left unattended to, they'd be rather... frizzy and messy.
ololololol.
2682531
I wont sexy fun time now
... 'Black Death' I see what you did there.
And... nope. Repressing the whole Chapter. Leaving for the next chapter now. Kaythanksbye!!!
The image isn't appearing for me. Other than that, brilliant.
I have a bad feeling about next... CELESTIA ARE YOU GOING TO TROLL?!
When can we expect the next chapter?
2752926 Depends on if I get off my ass sooner or later. So, blame me if it doesn't come out in your... preferred... time window. The chapters you see were pre-written; 'tis why they were released so quickly.
Can't tell if Kratos is having a "Poor Pity Me" moment, or if the author said "Fuck this guy, lets make fun of him!"
wondering if you'll reference the story of the games up to Ghost of Sparta
WHAT THE SHIT?
3457497 Glad I got 'ya to laugh
update now
Oh man, you´re doing a great job with this, will we see an update soon
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
"Bazinga!"
wait... when did sheldon cooper get here?
Next chapter plz
interesting
Well, I can certainly say the quality of writing has improved since the beginning of the previous story...
The content, however... *shakes head* shameful...
What was the change to the blades? You never specified.
Also, you seem to be having some trouble in giving the image you see to us readers. I can tell you have the full image in your mind, but translating it to te page seems to have made it lose most of its luster...
I feel like I stumbled on a dead story/author.
His bow, his earthshaker spell, medusa head, crystal spear and hi golden fleece is missing come on. I know this is when he fell from the gow 3 and went into equeatria but how come he doeant have these weapons or spells
5577990 ME TWO