• Member Since 12th May, 2013
  • offline last seen Jun 16th, 2014

Coco-loco


Ummm..... I give up!!! Can't do this, I give up, ask me later!!!

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Fluttershy receives a present mysteriously on the doorstep one night. She starts avoiding everyone. Stops talking, only glares. Her kindness leaves her. She looks different now, no longer Fluttershy but still Fluttershy. Voices come from her house. One day she's gone. Ponies check her cottage, anypony to go in doesn't come out.

More voices in her cottage. More ponies start to come out, their kindness is gone. But when one comes out with an object Ponyville falls into a trance. Kindness disappearing around ever corner. Fluttershy never comes out, not the old Fluttershy anyway. Not the real town's ponies. No, they all stay inside.

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Continue. Please. :pinkiesmile:

Um, please do continue. This seems very interesting.

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