• Member Since 4th Apr, 2013
  • offline last seen Aug 23rd, 2022

BRD


i'm a reader and a thinker. But I'm not a great writer.

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One minute when I was on the Computer. The next minute I'm in Equestria. How did that happen?

Fallow me as I start a new life in Ponyville.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 44 )

FUCK SERIOUS STORIES, THIS IS WHERE IT'S AT. :flutterrage:

JBL

2593733 RIGHT ON! (wish there was a rock lee with his eyes on fire emoticon!)

Comment posted by Thorlol deleted Aug 14th, 2014

Geez, half this story is a parenthetical aside.

Are you sure that you're 21 years-old? Cause I have seen a lot of people. faking their age.

Comment posted by Jade Curtiss deleted May 25th, 2013

Damn, that cover picture is so amazing. 10/10.

i lik yor drawing its nice:yay:

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Comment posted by Lokimen deleted May 29th, 2013

Just an FYI, deleting comments only gets you more thumbs down on here.

Read before you write also work with the details a little

Self Insert Gary Stu who falls in love with one of the Mane 6. :pinkiesick:

:ajbemused: :facehoof:

BRD

I'm more of a person that can thinks up the "what if" factors of a story. :ajsmug:

But, as far as details go.... :derpytongue2:

It's kind of iffy. :rainbowhuh:

You know "sometimes you got it and sometimes you don't" :twilightblush:

I think my best work is "Boo-busting in Equestria" story. :pinkiehappy:
The worst I think was "Who am I?" story. :pinkiesick:
If any of you would like to work on a story with me. Let me know.:twilightsmile:

Thanks
BRD

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I'll work on a story with you! I can be a proofreader! :pinkiehappy:

But a collab? Yeah, I'll do it!

30 dislikes.
Damn.
Like... wow.
That's...:rainbowderp:

Comment posted by TorontoFCBrony deleted Feb 22nd, 2022

OK, I'm doubly pumped on Sabaton right now and I still can't read this without stopping from sheer frustration on how idiotic it is.

I like to give advice on each story I review, but I'll tell you this, author: this story is an idiotic mess that violates so many laws of even mediocre literature that it should be deleted forever and never spoken of again. It's just so amazingly, astoundingly, mind-numbingly idiotic that I can't bear to keep reading it.

If this is a trollfic, you want your readers to actually read it first. Trolling by making the story an indecipherable, incomprehensible mess defeats the point of trolling, since no one will want to read the whole thing.

Well, well, haven't read fics like these in a while. Gonna grab some chips and coke at one point, and enjoy a few hours of laughter, hopefully.

Just then a blue bluer came for us.

This needs a comma.

I work as a Live couch

Can I pay you for me to sit on you for a couple days?

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I work as a Live couch

Do you hide under him?

3354344 The couch I hide under is pretty dead.

Comment posted by The Vault Tech deleted Sep 20th, 2014
Comment posted by thechicken95 deleted Oct 3rd, 2014

Oh my god. Are you still policing the comments of a year-and-a-half-old story to delete ones you don't like?

Pinky

That bugged me more than it should have...

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This is so old, I know none of these people, nor are they even active anymore!

Except Lokimen. Him and I are good buddies.

I want that 10 minutes of my life back. :facehoof:

I don't even know where to start with this one. The story isn't to my liking but your writing style is what has probably brought all the downvotes. Check out other stories and follow the writing style most authors on here use.

Comment posted by cheayhotbeef deleted May 31st, 2015

I was going to post one of my trademark "asshole in a gif" gifs, but. I realized I do not have the necessary reaction to express just how bad this is.

That comment graveyard tho

This is one of the worst stories I've read in my entire life... gg

If you're sarcastic enough, they'll never suspect a thing

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You can delete comments here? Oh wow that is just... Cenzorship at this point

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Lol random but I actually remember commenting that. Can't believe it was 9 years ago already.

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