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Nothing

Big Macintosh and Fluttershy are in a happy marriage with two foals of their own, but what happened to make them break one year after Hearts and Hooves day? Based on the song "Nothing" by the Script

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Dostoron

Dostoron #1 · Feb 10th, 2012 · · ·

average...i really got nothing else

DarthSylar12

DarthSylar12 #2 · Feb 13th, 2012 · · ·

I liked it. A little on the short side but I like the idea of consequences the CMC didn't realize. Also FLUTTERMAC

MidoriReika

MidoriReika #3 · Feb 14th, 2012 · · ·

206479 Re-edited it if you would like to re-read and tell me your thoughts. Constructive criticism will be much appreciated

Dostoron

Dostoron #4 · Feb 14th, 2012 · · ·

upon retrospect... my earlier comment was a bit too unconsidered. The overworked version does help in seeing that. the point of the story slipped by me completely the first time, that it was about the impact thoughtless actions can have, also helped a bit that falling into the river isn´t suicide this time.
solid 3.5-4 stars, sorry bout the other one.

emberghost

emberghost #5 · Feb 15th, 2012 · · ·

Fluttermac!

MidoriReika

MidoriReika #6 · Feb 18th, 2012 · · ·

219958 It's okay. I always appreciate constructive criticism on my writing in order to improve my hobby

RedCharge

RedCharge #7 · Mar 12th, 2012 · · ·

I liked it alot mate, wish you made it a little longer though.
But i see what you did there with naming his son Cider

MidoriReika

MidoriReika #8 · May 24th, 2015 · · ·

313533 I was going to make it into a longer story but then I lost interest in the series before completely forgetting I even had this account. I will make an attempt into getting back into the swing of fan fiction though!