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stormy


Hello... My name is stormy. I'm a 23-year-old female. In my free time, I do a lot of gaming, writing and drawing. Rarity is my favorite pony!

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Rainbow Dash has never mentioned a brother -- and for good reason: Stormdrift is a shy, cheerless stallion known best for living in his Wonderbolt sister's shadow. After being forced to move from Cloudsdale, Stormdrift refuses most social contact -- until Pinkie Pie forces herself into his life, intent on cheering up the stallion the best way she knows. However, when Pinkie learns that parties and mounds of sugar cannot soothe every tear, she dedicates herself to learning what true joy really is -- but the answers she finds are not at all what she expected.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 48 )

This looks good. Style is excellent, and the characters thus far has been portrayed well. No obvious spelling errors or grammatic mistakes. I like it. Keep it up!:twilightsmile:

This...that... Pegasus, ive seen him before, this wouldn't happen to be him would it? :

Grey clouds

Cheers
~iraqlobstah

approved now next chapter .. everyday there is no chapter, i poke fluttershy with a stick.

This intrigues me. I'll keep an eye out for the next chapter :moustache:

“Just be yourself. Everyone will love you.”

I know there are humans.

You please me, proceed.
:pinkiehappy:

Interesting....it seems like it would really suck to be the Element of Loyalty. Basically, you could just use the whole thing as blackmail until you HAVE to go along with it /=

Such a great story. Awaits for more patiently.

So cool and sad. I would love to know what happens.

this must continue, this character intrigues me. :)

First, let me say that I love the story you created, it really sucks me in. It all is well written and nothing seemed out of the ordinary grammatically. Note: I have a terrible sense of grammar but I guess I represent an average joe? Now I don't know if I can offer anything really useful but I noticed one thing.

A missing word.

When they left, the stallion could not even get near the door

you forgot to add "get". Sorry if I am exceeding my boundaries as a commenter. However, I think this story is going to be filled with awesome. Also I am sorry to hear about the feedback that killed your drive. Anyway, best wishes!

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That was purposeful :D "Near" is a verb ^^ Thank you!!

I dont see why it has gotten some bad feedback, I read the other 2 chapters and reread them to be sure and Im Positive they still hold up from when I read them.

Dosn't matter, Great chapter anyway.

Just a quick question, are you going to portray Rainbow Dash as a part of his depression issue?

Most storys I have read that have followed this kind of premiss has gone the route of "It wasn't my fault, It was bully, Mistreated by parents (As in rainbow being the attention of them), He was always like that Ect..." These kind of development in a story really just irritate me because no matter how much they defend themselves, They are part of the problem, As shown with the talk early on.

I really hope you dont go that route and instead make rainbow need to confess that she has done wrong, Intentional or not and that it has caused problems for him and that she needs to atome for the mistakes that has happened while in the same time you make the brother debate if he should forgive her for the things done by her and how it has pretty much destroyed most of his life...Or you could just whatever route you want to.

If I had to rate this fic (Not that anyone has asked) I would rate it a 8/10, For the good setup, Good O/C and Great scenes in the story so far but whats holding it back is this next chapter that could either make or break the story and the fact that their isnt much of anything going on, Just someboby living a life, Still, I find this Fic to be very enjoyable and entertaining, Keep up the good work

(These are just some Dumb thoughts from an Below-Average commentor so I dont know how to write anything good, Just thoughts...)

very interesting keep it up, im loving storm drift <3

Gee Dashie... you really disappoint me :facehoof:

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"A mare who shuns family away for fame, shall feel the hurt of solitude for a fortnight" :trollestia:

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A fortnight is only two weeks!
Like I said, give her time... XD

All I can say is that I can't wait for the next chapter, and I'm guessing that Dash doesn't quite realize what type of... bad... impact she's having on him.
Time will tell, but considering her "I got the ticket!" dance in Ticket Master and her bragging ways in Mare Do Well... I hold no hope at this point until I see proof.

I'm sorry, but I had to laugh at the "no, not another panic attack" part
:rainbowlaugh:

Good story.

Oh crud I just realized something, TWILIGHT NOW HAS A BROTHER! It's your choice whether or not to edit, I am fine either way, just stating how I realized something. Keep up the amazing/awesome/epic work!

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I'm still around and have a couple more chapters written and could upload, but didn't really think it worth it since the story doesn't seem to be taking off very well. I was sort of making it a personal project at this point.

oh well i still loved it

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I think it has taken off swimmingly, a lot better than my story did that's for sure :pinkiesmile:

Rainbow is being a dick. 'Nuff said.

Also, finally updated!

Oh this will be good!

Rainbow, why you such a douche? I hope he does ruin things and your friends are there to back him up. :facehoof:

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Super dick/douche. But she'll redeem herself, don't you worry (so will Storm).

Fav'd!

Smooth writing, good descriptions, believable characters.....yay! :pinkiehappy:

What, really? I didn't think this was really taking off so I just sort of stopped working on it. I was getting a lot of hate for the straight ship.

3601763 Nah, no hate from me or anypony I can see so far on this comment page.

Please finish this fanfic, I really enjoy it.

Are you going to finish this? I’ve read this a few times and it’s seriously great!!!

tough this will never finish, very quality for what it was

Oh, so that's the story that got stuck in my head! :rainbowlaugh:
Thanks to that I wrote my own story, so thank you for writing this!

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