Hey everypony, im Navy Shadow. Also known as Azura
Rainbow dash gets the invite of a lifetime, a chance to train for the wonderbolts, but will she miss her friends? and will wonderbolt training be all its cracked up to be
-Next chapter soon guys!
-Changed rating to T, for what i have instore for RD ;)
- Added Dark as a category
-Updated Chapers 1+2
-Now Also on Fanfiction.net
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Sorry...but Dash and Fluttershy are OOC, there are tons of spelling mistakes, and the grammar is horrible. I am disappoint.
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I hate doing this but
Excuse me?
Who says you have the right to go around and judge people by there mistakes.
Why can't you just think: "This is a good story, dispite the grammar mistakes and spelling."
MY friend i275.photobucket.com/albums/jj290/TheWoodenBlock/disappoint-2.jpg
I think this is great!
Keep up the work!
hey gurs, CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is helpful thanks, and all you that have tracked, thanks even more. part 3 coming tonight, also parts 1 and 2 will be edited for spelling and grammar errors
This is so awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter!
-miningpyropony
new chapter in a couple days :)
Werent the 4th chapter gonna be uploaded 2 days ago?
318276 IT WILL COME SOON!
392169 dont judge a book by its cover, or comments in this case. Yes the grammar may be off in places and it may seem like the characters are ooc in some places but this is my first fic, dont expect perfection
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GOD DAMNIT!
You had me going there man!
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206294 dude if you are disappointed by that then you will absolutely hate my story
Now to the story I love the title I though I was the only one that knew about the offspring
MAJOR EDIT: dude great story
870318
thanks, i hope to continue this soon!
The title is the best song in existence, so this seems interesting. I'll read it.
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Oh god no, this is my first and worst fic, i wrote better in Code: Equestria and Diaries of Sleep Deprived ponies
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It actually isn't too bad so far, the only problem is the multiple grammatical errors.
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Yeah... I could do with re-writing this, fixing the gramattical errors and such and probably making it longer