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You know, this was actually very good and not psychotic!
Can we see more of these two?
Refreshing to see a mildly normal chapter this time, after that last experience. Keep up the good work, this is the ONLY clop fic i have and most likely will ever read.
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Normal is refreshing, isn't it?
Still, the silliness shall resume soon. 50% clop, 50% satire, 20% cooler.
Heehee... Nicely done.
After all, you gotta please the ladies as well.
~Skeeter The Lurker
2ft?
woah
Yay. No death this time.
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You could argue that this is technically rule 63 of the previous chapters' general formula, but yeah, it's definately the most normal. Was almost expecting inflation towards the end, but no such luck. Ah well.
This. Was. Awesome! More like this, all my yes for things like this!
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Dont stay normal too long, it can get boring after a while, i enjoy crazy.
Damn, I was hoping for rule 63 of hello.jpg at the end. Oh well. Still good.
That was really nice.
Because latex gimp suits and bondage toys from the second person prospective of a female in a (regrettably) predominantly male fandom is "normal".
I fucking love this fandom.
Oh this one was lovely, but come on studs going to earth as a reward for... Studing? Sorin you just had sex what are you going to do now? I'm going to earth and convince a human female to sleep with me.
Also latex fetish (light bondage) is a bit tame by internet standards. But overall I loved this chapter. it had romance and a deadbeat bf getting dumped.
I love this chapter. It's normal, and Soarin get's a freaken awesome break for once.
Heh even ladies need loving and sexing as well! Very nice job!
What a delightful premise for a story. I also had a good laugh at the group it's posted under, Pony on Human rape. I don't think you could have a less subtle group name if you tried.
Good story though, I like your humor
hands.
hands
hands
Ponies, now with hands.
Also some grammar issues with the repeated words in some places.
I've read many human on pony clop but this is the first time I have ever read one witha female and pony. and it was awesome.
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*gets basted out of seat*
Holy hell! calm down man!
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I already edited it to fix it, unfortunately though funny, I'm pruning an entire flame war out and need to take your size 400 font with them :(
(or make them smaller before I finish the delete, that works too, tons of flamey-wamey stuff I instigated needs purged.)
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It's all right, I always like making people laugh My friends say I'd be Pinkie Pie. ACTIVATE INFINITE ENERGY RESERVES! *ZOOM!*
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If my comments where incendiary in any way, i apologize. it was not my intention to cause offence.
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wasn't bad until they suddenly went from like inch tall letters to four inch tall letters.
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Nah, deeper in the thread people said things to each other that were neither loving nor tolerating, so I excised it all.
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you should have seen when someone said "Could you have use a bigger font?" so I did, size 600
2543380 Confirmed.
2543405 Nope. It was the most erotic.
2543590 Yes. It's satire, not a collection of short clop fics. Wonder if it's too late to change the title to "a collection of satirical clop fics." Would have saved me many headaches.
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2544200 Now canon.
2544463 Tropes, satire, strange, and clop all in one six-inch package.
2544894 The story, and Pinkie, are both having identity issues.
2544964 Smart assyness is next to godliness
2544966 That's pretty much the fic in a nutshell.
Hollywood is capitalized, it is a place so therefore a proper noun. "I" think "I" need to be 40 like Jennifer Anniston, "I" think not! Jewel Staite however, yes.
My mind is blown as well. Though, is it sad that I understood what was being said. I was one badass priest, no one died under my watch if I could help it.
I liked my Night Elves, least till Blizzard thought, "let's fuck all the druid talents". This Jeff fellow sounds like a tard, you don't screw over a lady when there are other females she knows who are not in an active rivalry with her. They will form a pack and get any offender back.
But they're so gosh darn expensive and you can only find them at convenience stores.
NOT eww, I would be thinking the same thing if I was in said position, and I had a vagina and a pair of breasts.
It needs convincing?
Sadly, not a real product, but the name just about had me in tears.
I think you over used "quickly".
Did someone get a little excited here? Hmmm? Things going too slow for you?
Oh look what I found, a Wonderbolt dog!
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If length of comment means anything, this is probably my favorite chapter so far... That seems kinda of telling...
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I think I just realized something about myself.
By far one of your best works on this yet, I didn't think I would be into this one but like always you prove me wrong.
2552020 I sorta wanted it to be 'better' than the others, so no shock fetish satire to leave a bitter after taste. . . this time.
2550742 Thanks! Said ladies can look forward to move loving, voring, and more!
2550626 Soarin is best sex buddy.
2549460 Rule 63 will get a gender-bending to the extreme satire eventually.
2551658 I agree. Lucky female anon. . .
Wow. You cannot write for a female voice at all, man.
Like seriously.
Wow.
Wow.
EIDT: It gets better after a minute but that first part was painful for me to read.
Your character's masochism at putting up with her boyfriend for so long is even more mythical than a pony in our world.
What I don't get: Why does everyone think 'holy shit it's a pony'? I mean my first reaction would be to go for horse, no matter the size. Because that's what they are. Horses.
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I don't know, but it keeps me up at night.
Or it's because colorful, small, and cute = girly = poines. If you ask a random person what a horse is they'd know it's brown, tall, and huge, but show them a talking pink horse that's four feet tall and giggling? Strikes me as a pony.
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You can tell how many girlfriends I've had. That was the worst Nefarion raid I ever did...
Honestly, if there is a class on it female voicing, any advice, or if I knew a single female to talk to / listen to, it'd be a great help.
I'd also like a deeper understanding of the female orgasm so I can write better
fictionclop. Somehow, I doubt I'll find that deeper understanding anytime soon.Next time, I'll just gag and hogtie her first. Can't speak? No voicing issues.
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Well, again, it gets 'better' a bit but the fact that her entire thought process revolves around her boyfriend for the first few minutes - that really, really, really, really was hard for me to read. It might have been a better idea to have her be single from the get-go and not really thinking about sex or the opposite-of until 'suddenly pony' to give her more of an appearance of depth. There's a 'test' (that I can't remember the name of) where you 'fail' if - at any point in the writing - the female character concentrates on the opposite sex. The idea is that males tend to write female characters as 'how they relate to me/another male' rather than how they relate internally to themselves.
Then again, I would posit that many male characters would eventually fail this test (though not NEARLY as fast as female characters do) simply because how characters relate to one another is an important part of writing. I suppose it's the emphasis the writer places on the relationships: male characters would first be positioned relative to other males before females. Then again, we also have gender bias in situations as well. A story about, say, a space captain would situate that captain in regards to her or his peers and the majority of those would probably be written as males - so failure due to subject/gender bias.
Writing original fiction, I've taken to 'randomizing' character traits such as gender, religion and race because those three things should not have much bearing on the character unless I make it a point that those traits do. It ... works. Not awesome but pretty great. Gives a more organic feel to the piece but I can lose out on some situations because I didn't plan the characters.
Anyway, I know what you were going with but the way you positioned the female lead here makes it really hard for me to identify her as a 'strong female' lead - and with her predilections - i.e. the bondage et al - I think a strong female would have given this piece more 'oomph.' I think this piece, as a meta-commentary piece ... deserves? that level of thought. Anyway, back to your ugly-grinding ponies people.
OH! Before I forget! Plot? Really? We're adding plot to why random ponies rape humans? Really? Can't they use artificial/test tube insemination? Millions of sperm (and millions of potential males) are wasted if it's a natural pregnancy. Sorry, this is not at all important to the story, just a thought.
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Wow that's more advice than I hoped for. I might actually be able to pull this off now.
As soon as this shift is over I can start fixing it, and I see how the boyfriend bit was too much. I just wanted to mock people who play WoW, instead she comes off kinda bitchy, or clingy?
Anyway, I've been screwing around with plot ideas today like "what is ridiculous enough but plausible?" Someone said "the ponies think the humans aren't real so they fulfill their darkest desires." I liked that, I guess the idea they're focing every stallion to have endless sexual torment won't work very well.
I need to cut the line that somehow human males are getting the ponies pregnant "because magic." Forget logic, I'm going back to how it used to be before someone told me I needed a pizza guy to drive the plot forward.
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I think you're talking about the bechdel test. If so, it's not that stringent. It requires movies to have 1) two or more women 2) who talk to each other 3) about something besides a man/men in general. They can talk about men, so long as they talk about something else as well. I personally would expand that to stereotypical "girl" topics such as shoe shopping, but that's just me. Lord knows hollywood fails it enough.
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YES! That was it ... and you're right, it's not as harsh as I originally thought. But still, I think this work failed. 'You' and this Julie pretty much talk about ... whatever this boyfriend's name is and nothing besides.
And again, while the test may not be as bad as I made it out to be, I think it's more the emphasis and situations. Here's a girl that got stood up after making her boyfriend dinner and it's implied that this has happened a number of times.
WHELP.
I'm going to step up to bat and guess that the story you referenced was in fact my own When a Pony Calls. The fellatio scene kinda gave it away.
A normal chapter for us pegasisters, and of the pony I chose! .....I don't know whether to feel happy that you wrote it or shamed that I read it...
Also, the entire natire of this fic has be think of this quote from Chuggaaconroy: "BEASTIALITY! THIS IS NOT SONIC NEXT GEN!"
Now I wonder if I can expect a sequel to this chapter later considering Soarin's note. Or if you do another MpxF chapter not with Soarin', I vote Shining to be next.
2552709 I wasn't too find of that "boyfriend-obsession thing" at the beginning too, personally (me being one of the two females in the fandom he mentioned), but I thought it was pretty good other than that (given what it was)
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I'm working on a "bonus chapter" that compiles a 'slice of life' style look into what happened to each character so far.
So, Soarin' does come back, but can their love overcome a long-distance relationship across dimensions?
Also, in "the name of science" I read up on male equine anatomy . My reaction was utter shock.
2557936 More Soarin'? My mind says "Yay!"
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So you basically gave me an asshat version that makes it to where I would have to read to find out what you meant, and when I do read it, it's similar to what you said, but ntohing of what you said.
OH MY GOD I FOUND THIS RIGHT AFTER I FOUND FORCED PONY CUDDLES AND I LITERALLY FELL OUT OF MY CHAIR! I'll see myself out...
OH MY GOD I'M A GIRL!!!!!!!!! *Strips and enjoys the view* Me happy
More Soarin ^^ pls :D That's awesome!! :D
What can I say, young man, that hasn't been said already, but as one of those two females in the fandom... I juiced all over this chair, my jeans and the floor.
At the risk of making my dear Thaylien jealous.... I'M JEALOUS!! Why does she get the amazing, mind-blowing pony sex and I don't?!
Also, as a female talking to a male, I'm very, very glad you mentioned that this girl had been teaching herself all sorts of kinkiness before this, otherwise I would have been forced to point out that it's a vagina, not a Tardis, vast objects do not fit into it without practice and generous anatomy. So thank you for that, it suspended my disbelief by just the right amount that I got immersed in the clop deliciously.
Another cause for thanks; latex play. You set out to dedicate this to the lady cloppers, and you've just made a solid fan of this one. More please!