Waking up in a tree usually doesn't mean its gonna be a good day...today on the other hand I find it to be the opposite...at least in the short run as i find myself in a world of ponies
The first day of the new school year at Canterlot high and although every new pony looks to make an impression , eight new Freshmen most likely will in a very big way.
When the ignorant find knowledge they are dangerous. One man understands this, and so seeks to educate the nation he once fought for, and to bring down it's tyrant ruler.
Good job! I really enjoy this story, it's well written, there aren't that many mistakes (one being you put "form" instead of "from" somewhere in there.) and I thought your way of getting to Equestria was really original.
I must say, this was amazing! For being your first story, you did an amazing job. This story manages to have both humor and a sad tone, yet you execute both perfectly. Keep up the amazing job.
Very good story! Can't wait for more! Write the next chapter as soon as possible!
Good job!
I really enjoy this story, it's well written, there aren't that many mistakes (one being you put "form" instead of "from" somewhere in there.) and I thought your way of getting to Equestria was really original.
Continue to do your new fans proud!
I must say, this was amazing! For being your first story, you did an amazing job. This story manages to have both humor and a sad tone, yet you execute both perfectly. Keep up the amazing job.
Passing out, black voids, despondent voices saying creepy things to the main character! Are you sure Ally isn't Jason.
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Heh yeah now that I look back, she does experience similar things as Jason. Except I think they're for different reasons.