after esticado rejected the darkness, the creather of all things evil seeks a new world for conquest. after searching aimlessly he and the last darkling finds a world inhapidet by ponys. it's cute, its colerfull, its sickaning, and perfect for a new dominian. the question is- who will be the new host of the darkness? why only the strongest pony in equestria- twilight sparkel. with her magic and the darkness emense power thay will rule equestia. with the help of the main six turned evil and the army of darkness. and in the middle of it all is trixie who will soon be the wife of twilight and the surget mother of the next darkness barer. can celestias army save twilight, or will the darkness succeed.
Chapters (5)
If you take the time to read it loud, spelling errors and all, it becomes a half-decent comedy.
Otherwise, it's either an iffy trollfic or an absolutely horrid writer.
I'm too much of an idiot to distinguish the two.
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Said the one who spelled paragraphs as "paragrafs" with
spell check built into the comment box...
Cheers
~iraqlobstah
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My spell check wasn't setup to English, so I failed there. Thanks for pointing that though :)
Damnit! I was really thinking about doing this after I finished up my first fic
I see what you did there.
Stop that.
Yeah, I haven't read this story, but I've not long ago got The Darkness 2 and well, one of the chats with Jonny said that The Darkness can only have a MALE host, and well Twilight's female not male, it's was also said in the game that the thing that can fight The Darkness needs a FEMALE host, may want to think about that.
223750 I understand what you saying but let's go over some stuff
1. This is not earth. So I don't think the rules apply here
2. Even if a story doesn't fallow the continuity of the sorce meterial that well. If its at least enjoyable is shouldn't matter
3. screw the rules, I'm evil.
But I see what your saying. In the next chapter I'll explain how the darkness was able to poses twilight
224277 but where's there's Darkness there's light, and seeing how you made it so The Darkness has a female host in this, so why not, I don't know say, Jackie comes along with the power of light to the fight The Darkness that he one had inside of him to redeem himself for all the choas and death, he caused with The Darkness.
224310 that's a great idea. I'm far from that point but I will be sure to give you credit for that idea.
224317 Your wecome, I mean, who better to fight The Darkness, then Jackie, I mean it left him in hell, man I could see the same snake like things he had when The Darkness was inside of him, but made out of pure light, and similar powers but just with the power of light, thats how I would see Light Jackie, how would you see him?
224328 I think he whould have the heads in white and insted of dekaing all pure but also have ram horns and angle wings.
224376 But the light needs a female host, so for Jackie it would only be the heads things and just remember, Jackie can't kill Twilight, he need to find a way to remove The Darkness from Twilight and the kill it. I mean he uses GUNS, guns that fire bullets of pure light that is, still they could kill Twilight and Co, remember light burns The Darkness in the game.
Wait wait wait. Dude, The Darkness will always win. Remember: Were there's Light, there is Darkness. Guess I'll have to stay put and see what will happen.
BTW: Still waiting on that chapter to edit, dearkheart.
257606 About the Darkness always winning, I'm going to say to things: Kingdom Hearts 2 and Riku. You do the maths.
257646 Never played KH, so I have no math to do
258010 Riku is a friend of the person you play as who is called Sora, in KH1 Riku is working with The Heartless and uses the power darkness, (different type) but in KH2 Riku is using the same power to fight The Heartless along side Sora and co, making him a darkness using hero.
258039 confusing... I'll take a look into that.
258738 Ok, you should see my point after you've looked into it.
I just have one thing to say here's Jackie Estacado now The Darkness is in for it, it's going to wish it had stayed with Jackie now.
Maybe it will return to him, maybe.
but right now, I'd like to see more Darkness win
263512 Yeah but Jackie gain control of The Darkness at the end of the game, so that must mean so if it is still inside of him.
267431 It can be some of that crazy stuff that happened in the second game, it may be some dark essence, not the Darkness itself inside Twilight. And lets not forget the British darkling! He was epic! And may be helping Jackie.
267676 Yeah, and his last dieing words to Jackie was "Try not to fuck it up eh monkey?" Man, I cracked up lauthing at that bit, that when ever I grabed him with those dark snake head he would some times say "Fuck no, not again." LOL.
267700 I called him Wilson. Don't ask why.
We The Darkness is gone from Twilight, but its not going to give up just like that.
558269" EMBRACE THE DARKNESS TWILIGHT!" "AT LAST! I FEED!" these lines need to be in there somehow
205010 You can still do it just do a different story line bro