Twilight sparkle has always loved Rainbow dash ever since she first met her. Her main being a wavy rainbow, her beautiful and powerful wings, The fact that she is the only pony that can do the sonic rainboom, and let's not forget her beautiful and tone flank. Twilight has been admiring her from afar but has just not have the guts to approach with her with her true feelings. She is to afraid to risk there friendship. She just wishes she had a way to get close to her and be her special somepony, not just a friend. The answer to her prayers may have just hit her right on the head.
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This is an interesting story. Cool idea, I've seen Rainbow Blitz and Twilight, but not Dusk Shine and Rainbow Dash. Can't wait for more.
I agree with manuccia, but the grammar is quite confusing.
This is a good story, but go back over it and fix some of the spelling errors. Also, it might help if you separate the dialogue paragraphs from the other paragraphs.
Quite a few errors. A couple times I had to reread a sentence because I couldn't understand it.
Interesting concept though. I'm listening.
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Rainbow Blitz and Twilight Sparkle?
Would you mind telling me which fic that is exactly?
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It is part of the '63 Files' I believe.
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Its one of the two "Core" stories in the '63 Files', along with a M-Vinyl Scratch, F-Octavia storyline.
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This one?
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/3746/the-63-files
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Yeah. Personally I'd love to see more attempts to shake up the old 'traditional' ships like that.
"Twilight Sparkle has always loved Rainbow Dash ever since she first met her. Her mane being a wavy rainbow, her beautiful and powerful wings, the fact that she is the only pony that can do the sonic rainboom, and let's not forget her beautiful and tone flank. Twilight has been admiring her from afar but just doesn't have the guts to approach her with her true feelings. She is too afraid to risk their friendship. She just wishes she had a way to get close to her and be her special somepony, not just a friend. The answer to her prayers may have just hit her right on the head."