I never knew the ponies had affected me this badly. Never in the world would I have known my mind somehow was slowly going insane. I was stressed out and in desperate need to slow my roll. If I had a cookie for everytime I wish I could relax, I'd be best friends with Pinkie for having so many damn cookies. My life isn't necessarily a wreck, but somehow, in a weird pony filled way, I learned to slow down and enjoy myself. Even if I know I am insane.
Edit: Please for the love of god don't just dislike this story and run off. I'm really not in the mood for that bullshit, tell me why you disliked it at least.
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Feedbacks? Okay, you've made a story like the whole lofe in a nutshell.
So, tips and pointers?
What's next to the dialogue of another speaker should be their action, and things only that focuses on them.
Just learned that a month ago. That's why it gets others confused.
Other than that, I see no problem.
The story itself, and the fact that you've said that it is incomplete, is kind of giving me an itch. It's like it won't go away until I've finished reading the whole thing.
So please be writing the next part to receive a full, satisfying feed back.
2538880 Actually it was already fixed when I looked it over... weird. Anyways, yeah this is it, it's supposed to be completed, and I just changed the authors notes. I still want feedback of course, feel free to point out flaws, just keep in mind that this is just life in a nutshell. Basically what you said, but imagine me putting ponies as the little voices in my head.
2538880 Sorry I just realized what you meant...
Sounds like this could become a really good story
I will go insane if you don't finish
2540667 What if I told you that this is it. That there isn't anymore coming of this. It's called leaving at the climax, I'm a fan if one Mr. Hemingway after all.
2541389 Then start going insane my friend. I don't think I want an ending on this. I think it's perfect as it is.
Read it, liked it, reviewed it.
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I'm officially insane
2554883 Don't worry, we all are.