A sequel to Friendship...or something like that. The Cutie Mark Crusaders are continuing to try and make their business arrangement with Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon work out. Sometimes it's easier said than done. However complications are quickly arising as they find themselves plunged into the middle of a mystery and have little choice but to stick together to try and work things out.
How long can their partnership last? Will it advance to a new level or will it dissolve under the stress? Can Apple Bloom and Diamond Tiara stop being at each others throats? Will Scootaloo learn to trust the uppity fillies? Will Twilight have a new friendship report to send into Princess Celestia after everything is said and done?
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I'm glad the stories are pumping out so fast.
And they're actually good quality.
Hmmm....
I think I'll read all your stories to get ideas on good writing techniques.
I love this. Liked the prequel too. I predict the CMC not being idle.
The question I have is why Diamond didn't think she had to be nice to Apple Bloom, (whose family is the only supplier of zap apples) like she felt she needed to be to Frankfurt (whose father supplies common charcoal). Still like the story so far.
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Because Frankford would think nothing of letting Diamond Tiara know that his family had hers over a barrel and reminding her of this fact whenever it was necessary in order to get her cooperation. Apple Bloom is far too nice to pull such an underhoofed trick. And the Apples and Riches have a symbiotic relationship that's beneficial to both parties so they have good reason to stay at -relative- peace.
A good start. I like how civil DT was. It was almost scary.
She is really taking this business arrangement seriously, especially after that "Professional courtesy" she extended AB.
the old Diamond would have never let that die. She probably have had submitted the story to the foal free press.
Looking forward to more.
Why did you cancel this after only one chapter?
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A mix of reasons, really. Time constraints, writer's block, general frustration, and new ideas forming that had nothing to do with this story. What I had in mind would've been an interesting story overall, but I just couldn't make it work.