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kalash93

Joined December 2012
372 followers

Stories (15)

  • You Obey
    You are a changeling, servant of Queen Chrysalis. You always obey her orders, even when you don't want to. And at times like this, you really don't want to.

    5,555 words · 5,293 views · 88 likes · 5 dislikes
  • Last One Standing
    From the beginning, it could only end one way. Nopony lives forever.
    7,596 words · 3,058 views · 78 likes · 5 dislikes
  • You Are A King
    You are a king. You rule an ancient, mysterious land. You are powerful and ancient beyond compare. You are king of nothing. Most Dangerous Game contest entry.
    7,676 words · 222 views · 37 likes · 1 dislikes
  • I Did Not Want To Die
    The final thoughts of a fallen soldier. Dedicated to all who serve, all who survived, and all the fallen.
    4,727 words · 14,139 views · 102 likes · 13 dislikes
  • Racer And The Geek
    49,546 words · 4,393 views · 88 likes · 11 dislikes
  • Songs Uncle Sings
    1,630 words · 930 views · 22 likes · 1 dislikes
  • Bratan
    2,721 words · 217 views · 28 likes · 2 dislikes
  • Reflections
    4,784 words · 1,621 views · 22 likes · 2 dislikes
  • Shell Shock
    2,680 words · 3,616 views · 47 likes · 9 dislikes
  • Barren
    4,862 words · 195 views · 20 likes · 2 dislikes

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Comments ( 19 )

#2 · 69w, 5h ago · · ·

>>2487463

I exceeded expectations, no?

#3 · 69w, 5h ago · 1 · ·

>>2487587

In a good way.:yay:

The closest I ever came to that was Chapter 10 of my HiE fic.

#4 · 69w, 4h ago · 1 · ·

Very nicely done. Fluttershy seemed a little more aggressive then normal but good all the same.

A thumbs up  And a falsely innocent looking fluttershy.  :fluttershbad:

#5 · 69w, 1h ago · 1 · ·

>>2487587 My my, I did not expect this at all. Nice job though, one of the better clops I've read.

#6 · 69w, 38m ago · 1 · ·

Amazing I loved it!

#7 · 69w, 14m ago · · 1 ·

That picture is kinda freaking me.out :applecry:

#8 · 68w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

I hit the front page for the first time in over a week (I normally go straight to dashboard), planning to head over to “browse” and start looking for some nice, happy Flutterclop. This story was sitting at the top of the page. Clearly Fate has declared I must read it.

#9 · 68w, 6d ago · · ·

Yo,kalash, I want a spike and fluttershy clop, pwease? PLEASE! ANd I want twilight to walk in, if you did this, i'd owe you big time.:twilightsheepish::fluttershysad:

#10 · 68w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

Very nicely done and :yay: Fluttershy!

#11 · 68w, 6d ago · 1 · ·
#12 · 67w, 4d ago · · ·

Almost 1500 views! W00T! Thank you all so much for reading!

>>2490118

BookWyrm01, I'm glad that you liked it.

>>2490000

TheTownCrier, I always put effort into my works.

>>2489316

LilRainbowShy, be careful about entering into bargains with me, especially if you try to back out of them. Offer?

>>2489089

adavies42, does this meant that is was featured, in popular stories, or what? Thanks for reading and liking.

>>2488951

lugia, now imagine all the pictures that I rejected...

>>2488854

Zanytiger6, I aim to please.

>>2488487

Prince Solstice, you flatter me. I'm good, but not be that good. It's probably one of the better HiE clops.

>>2487737

WIWWM, that was the point. Somepony wanted to see Fluttershy being dominant. I liked the idea, so I wrote it.

>>2487637

ADRNEL, that's what I like to hear! I'm glad that you like my finished product. IDK if it's geting you traffic.

#13 · 67w, 4d ago · · ·

>>2538795

I'm not sure either.

I am close to 2,000 views though.

#14 · 67w, 4d ago · · ·

>>2538808

In any case, I just gave your story a plug and a link in the A.N. at the bottom.

#15 · 67w, 2d ago · · ·

>>2538795

Um. One of the two, presumably. At this point, I really don't remember, sorry. :twilightsheepish:

#16 · 66w, 5d ago · 1 · ·

Name of Story: Blissful Dream

Grammar: 7

Pros:

Very descriptive.

Good English.

Grasp on what sex really is.

Cons:

There's barely any show at all, only tell.

The characterisation.

Lack of explanations.

Notes: To start off with the negative. Who are these characters? They have names, but those can easily be switched out and it would make no difference for the story. The characterisation is quite lacking, and the biggest flaw of this story.

The story lacks explanation of who the human characters are and why the sex is happening. Half of it get cleared up in the end as a dream, but you just end up adding a similarly confusing character. I always felt like I had missed reading a chapter. It didn't exactly help that everything in the story was being told to me.

Some positives. You have a really good sense of grammar and could build your story up through descriptions. Although, it does become quite repitive at times.

You do manage to put words to the sex in a good and believeable way. That's not something many authors are capable of doing.

As a final note; this story was sadly not for me.

#17 · 64w, 5d ago · · ·

IF you do make my story, I will specify a story to your specific wants, post it, and I promise ANYTHING would be in that story (as long as it follows the rules of the site)Example:scootaloo walked in and suddenly took a shit. Now. I accept your offer. If you do not exept my offer you are allowed to object.

#18 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·

>>2634987

I'm not turning down your request. I just don't know when I'm going to do it. Yoy may have to wait a while.

#19 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·

Okay Dokey Smokey :pinkiehappy:

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