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*snrk* Bwahahahahaha!

Pretty good

So...comment graveyard huh?

7472746 I'll recap what you're missing:

"Pee is icky"

"Why did you delete my comment saying pee is icky? I was only joking."

"This is so disrespectful. Stop giving my total pervert waifu fetishes I don't like."

"Eww, scat porn. I'm going to report you and get you banned." (???)

7472766 The thing is, the only thing there's to go on is your word. Right now, all a reader is getting on their first impression is you can't handle dissent without a delete option. Hopefully you mature, as an attitude like that is ill fitting for creative pursuits.

This story was full of poorly thought out immature humor and little more.

And I found it to be absolutely hilarious. Nice work. It's a good break from stories with depressing, dark, and complicated themes. That and I laughed a lot.

Just a fair warning, DO NOT read this story aloud XD

7472921 As the author of this story the removal of threatening comments or comments made in disgust even though the outline clearly states what the story is about is at my discretion. If you would like to read the story and leave critique about my writing in order to help me improve I would appreciate that kind of comment.

7473348 Holy Crap, some actual feedback!

I prefer to think of the humor as crude, but immature works too. I am glad that you got a laugh out of it.

I would agree that you should not read this story aloud. I certainly did not have that in mind when I wrote it.

I really liked this story. You describe her desperation well, and the moment she ultimately loses control. The clopping scene felt very brief, but that's OK because I came here mainly for the pee. I hope you do more omorashi.

I appreciated the story and really loved the scenario/pee scene. It all seemed like a plausible scenario. I also appreciated the fact that the characters stayed in character fairly well. My only critique is that the clop scene could have gone into a little more detail. Overall, the story is fairly well written. I may have to cu-uhhhh revisit it a second time.

Heya... You don't mind if I draw a picture of this, do you? If you want, you can get an idea of what it might look like by looking for KonigBouncer on Derpibooru.

It was a fun story, sir.

Only noticed one little thing, "[...] though she was still worried that she'd have a warm stream of urine running down her hindquarters and at moment." Not sure if it's even worth fixing since i'm kinda late to the party, but figured i'd mention it just in case.

Please do more like this!

This FoE one-shot has more likes than mine. I will never recover from this epic destruction.