‘Twas the midmost of winter and into the town was a place where laughter, and cheer could be found. Ponies roamed through the streets with smiles on their faces, seeing bakeries, toy stores and other neat places.
But this is the part where the story gets weird, for this year's Hearth's Warming turns out worse than they feared. When Ponyville is introduced to its newest invader, a man dressed in black whose name is Darth Vader.
Written for the Hearth's Warming Eve Hearth's Warming Contest! (2nd Place :D)
Epic Pancake Productions reading
FanFics Anonymous reading (Mature)
featured on 12/20/14!
Chapters (1)
Yes.
5405537 :D
*dies laughing*
I approve.
5405562 :D
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whatisthisidonteven
I LOVE YOU! You even did it in rhyme!
So true.
Well I wouldn't say never, he wasn't always Darth Vader after all.
What expression? He's got a mask.
I love this. This should win, for sure.
If I could make more Darth Approves in the favorites category, I would add this to all of them.
5405588 XD XD Thanks Europa!
5405595 XD Thanks! I had a feeling you'd like it :D
I read the poem with this playing. It's so damn fitting. XD You earned a fave, like, and follow.
5405601 it mentions Star Destroyers. Of course I'll like it.
5405603 XD That really does fit!
5405606 XD XD XD
5405608 Darth Vader after all. I'm dying...
5405608
And then the filly ended up hurting herself because if you're not a Force user, there's no way you'll be able to handle the weight.
Loved it! Faved!
5405650 XD XD Thanks a bundle :D
5405653
You're welcome!
This is simply beyond wonderful.
5405707 :D Thanks! And also thanks for the follow :D
I love this.
Obligatory Darth Vader picture!
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5405720 Bwahaha! XD XD Thank :D
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5405751 :D :D :D I Freakin' love this video :D
5405751 reminds me of Dance off with the Star Wars Stars
5405763 XD I love all of those too XD
5405766 Vader and his boys always seem to win
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Oh how my heart leaps to hear such approval
your words to me are self-doubt removal
perhaps the characters were a bit out of key
it's a problem with the tale, I have to agree
it could have been better, this I will admit,
but writing in rhyme is just hard as shit!
XD Thanks again mate :D
5405950
I am reading your text with the narrator from the grinch...
5405987 It took quite a few hours that's for sure... Some friends of mine told me about the Hearth's Warming contest two days before the deadline so I scrambled to put this together XD
5405992 XD Great choice :D
5406006 it was a late night XD
5406024 :D Thanks for that mate!
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5406013 Suddenly your avatar pic makes a lot more sense
This was definitely a great story to read. I love how the whole story's a poem, has clever rhymes, and contains a great message about Hearth's Warming.
5406027 Bwahaha! XD yeah.
5406028 Thanks man :D
This is a splendid story, I must say,
but the correct term is 'stealing', with the letter 'a'.
Unf.
5405992 nice
This seems like MLP met Star Wars and the Grinch and made this ridiculously weird fic.
Have an audio reading!
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Hopefully it wasn't flubbed up too many times...
Creative rhyming: check.
Adorable moral: check (also, am I the only one who caught the pun in there?) 28.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_llj233vCD71qc89r5o1_500.jpg
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5405588 I agree. I spotted ALL dem errors( as well, DONT SASS YOUR UNCLE
Ummmmmm................
This was great!
Already trolling my anti-brony, pro-starwars friend with this... great job!
umm... after reading this again, isnt it dangerous to be giving a filly a lightsaber?
Quick, someone link the Star Wars Christmas Special!
5406136 I challenge you to a fanfic reading duel!
Let the games begin.
The only two rhymes in the story that made me cringe.
Also, twice you put "steeling" instead of "stealing" and:
Should be an apostrophe at the end of ponies.
All in all, a great Christmas Crossover.