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Tacs Repaid
A young English guy who likes some dirty ponies.
Tacs Repaid
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This sounds fun. I look forward to reading this this evening.
8210546 Have fun.
8210558
I will *winks*
Something about that single line is just so damn good.
Loved it.
Messiest thing I've read in a while!
8210928 Thanks.
While I do like to read about scat play, I feel your story here was set out way too quickly. As in, the characters are thrown into a relationship, and are having dinner in about 2 minutes of reading time, and then the scat comes out of no where. The descriptions were written well, but still too fast. These things are better when slowed down, and when detail really shines through. Not a bad story at all, but improvement could be made. 6/10
Could use some proof reading, and as 8211641 said, it progressed a little suddenly. A bit of hinting or foreshadowing would help. But alas I came and the sex scene was amazing - albeit a little hard to follow.
I don't care what anyone else says, *cough* *cough* CW *cough* *cough* I Loved This Story!
8211412 I gave ample warning in the description, if you don't like, don't read.
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8211712
Thanks for your advice, when I write the next one, I hope that it will be even better.
8218044
That's not okay to say.
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8218091
CW, you have been reported to the site admin for your comments. As per site rules, no personal attacks are allowed public or not.
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8218091
Too late, if you were the one to delete your comments, I have screen shots for the admins if they want them.
8218143
I'll just make another account asshole I have 15 different emails bitch y don't u screen shot my ass
8218146
Oh you won’t want to do that.
Either ignore people you don’t get along with, or be polite around them. Continued personal attacks and threats will earn you a ban.
8218143
I see what ur doingur trying to scare me its not gonna work
8218152
Who the hell RU
Real mature real mature let's all act like little asswhites don't we
8218152
I'm not listening https://youtu.be/lSet6htnVcQ
8218152
I don't care if I'm drunk or not all y'all r bitches
8218152
What even.
Wow I really must say I was expecting this fanfiction to be shity. Glad to see I wasn't wrong
Would it be possible to maybe get a second chapter or at continued story with maybe some poison joke peeing it definitely wouldn't Piss me off.
If not it won't affect how good this was nice job