Out In The Woods

My Little Toilet (Watersports, Scat etc.)1,256 stories ·975 members

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OmniFox

OmniFox #1 · Jan 3rd, 2016 · 1 · ·

A dragon's cum fills the tree up.

PiMan

PiMan #2 · Jan 3rd, 2016 · 1 · ·

You were a bit heavy on the description in the beginning, and (just as a personal preference) I would have liked to have seen more watersports action. Perhaps write a chapter 2 with some interactive liquid fun.

TerraZeal

TerraZeal #3 · Jan 3rd, 2016 · · ·

Good start, but I agree with PiMan. Another chapter, but with more watersports action and less description. In some stories, description is the best. In clop fetish stories, I want the clop fetish. Still, I liked. TwiJack is a cute pairing, much better than AppleDash, imo.

deadpansnarker

deadpansnarker #4 · Jan 3rd, 2016 · · 3 ·

Me : "Hey, I like coffee! I like apples! And, I LOVE watersports! Let's see what this fic has to offer."

*Opens fic*

Five seconds later...

*Closes fic in a hurry...*

Me: "Dear, oh dear..."

Summer Dust

Summer Dust #5 · Jan 29th, 2018 · 2 · ·

It was fairly good for a first story, both ponies were fairly in character for smutty writing. Don't be afraid to delve deeper into the kink, get more creative, or just more kinky in general; have them sniff it, experiment with tasting it, maybe lead up to straight drinking from the tap, so to speak? I'd love to see more, even if it's been a while.

Maxsteele