Writing as Intended · 2:58am
As a sidestep from working on Kite, I've taken the time to put some edits into Working as Intended as part of a birthday gift to a friend.
For starters, you'll find that there are now chapter titles. Not a big thing in the long run, but there's no reason not to have them, right? Once you get into the story, though, you'll see that the comedy is much smoother and there's more of it throughout. I do love this story and I intend to finish it, but I have to get Kite out there first. So you guys reading this for WaI, what happens to Twilight is just around the corner.