That's one more wrapped up! Thank you, everypony who took time to read Twice as Bright. It's been an absolute blast to write, but I definitively need to re-think and re-consolidate my writing/publishing strategy.
By which I mean "Cloudy is a dummy who should've never broken his self-made promise not to publish during the writing process after Lost and Found nearly permanently killed his desire to write." The whole re-thinking line is a lot catchier, so we're rolling with that.
Anyway! Point is, Twice as Bright is done! I am celebrating by staring at excellent, relevant artwork--holy butts that is beautiful and I almost embedded it but I don't know if that's a breach of etiquette--and by planning more stories.
Breaks are for, um. Well. People who take breaks. I mean, I've had a two day break, I suppose, but you're not here to read about me drinking sugar, eating sugar, and eating things not made of sugar but still covered in or frosted with sugar. You're probably here for:
More Ponies
Whenever I finish a story, I like to cleanse my palate. That's a fancy word for scraping your tongue clean. When I first started writing ponyfic, I watched the entire show at least once between each fic. I find this very useful to re-center myself on canon. It probably sounds pretentious or ritualistic, but it's as simple as me valuing starting from scratch very highly.
Lately, I haven't done this. In part because there are a lot more episodes, and not-writing hurts. In part because, without going into detail, there are elements of season 3 that I did not enjoy as much as I had hoped. Still, this time, I'm going to begin by re-watching the show. The last thing I want is to get mired in my own headcanon.
It's been surprisingly long since last I watched season 1, and I absolutely cannot wait.
Second? I plan to read. I plan to read fanfiction I promised I'd read, because I genuinely want to read more fanfic. I plan to read more fanfiction to make a dent in my Read Later list. I plan to read at least one non-pony thing--probably Daetrin's non-pony book, The Demon of Cliffside. I've been wanting to get at that thing for ages now. Before, during and after all this, I'm going to discuss all the ideas I have with my friends.
And then?
We write
If I sound very, um, pompous here, it's probably for a reason. I'm the kind of pony who, in writing, makes faces. If I'm writing Pinkie making a grimace, I'm making the very same grimace. If Rarity looks arch and scoffs at something, I'm staring at my computer screen like its very presence offends me--you get the idea. That I'm writing a long piece on this is because it reflects what I want to write. I'm leaning towards something longer. Something grandiose.
That's not to say I'm decided yet, and I've said time and again I hate making promises even to myself. I'm just thinking out loud, and all I know is this:
*The next fic will feature two or more ponies.
*At least one of these two or more ponies will think that one of the other two ponies is really, really cute/swell/nice.
What I suspect is this:
*It probably won't have the majority of its action in Ponyville or Canterlot.
*It will probably involve perceived or very real peril.
In short, I'm thinking another adventure along the lines of Within and Without or Lost and Found. When I say "along the lines of," I really only mean "long adventure," and even that's not set in stone, but I will say I'm looking towards W&W/O with fond memories.
Add to list of things to do before writing: Re-read own adventure fics.
I have no details, and I have tons of other ideas that may make it into fic. A lot of authors seem to do these compilation posts of ideas for fics and such, and I don't know how interesting it is to most, but if I can mention in no particular order:
RariLuna slightly-dark/adventure/political/mystery.
Those who read my earlier blogs will remember this one. It is one of three ideas I had in my mind a while back. Also, when I say "slightly dark," you have to keep in mind how incredibly resistant I am to darkfic and such. What I call "dark" when I write probably doesn't match others' definitions.
FlutterDash long ship.
Lost and Found really made me want to explore FlutterDash on a deeper level. This is it. The problem is that I'm not sure I can write another non-adventure ship just yet. It'd be fairly intricate and emotional, but I've done a lot of those lately.
Other ships/stories I want to do:
TwiJack - I have an angle that could work. It's Ponyville-centric, so the problem is the same as with FlutterDash, but I really want to do this.
RariLight - I have some very specific unicorn-centric ideas that could be good. May even be a friendship fic. (Cloudy writing non-ship? Ha!)
FlutterDash - I have no less than three other ideas for this ship of varying length, though the goal is to use as much as possible for the fic above.
PinkieShy - Of all the "pure" ships I want to write, this one is very high on the list. Again, same issue as above with it being a pure ship, but if I could make it part of an adventure, I'd be very happy.
AppleDash - Problematic in that the ship's been done to death. That in and by itself isn't the issue, but that I don't know if I'm stepping on others' hooves is. I have two possible angles, one being rather different from the usual ship formula.
ApplePie/RariPie - I have semi-similar ideas for these, but I've written so much heavy emotion Pinkie Pie that this will probably go on the back-burner. Also, it's actually the closest to sad that I'll ever want to go. I could write an ApplePie that I'm sure would be a decent read, yet I'd have no desire to read it myself. That is an odd position to be in.
RariDash - Painful sweetness here, but it needs a framework I haven't worked with yet. One that is neither adventure nor simple long-ship. This will be a challenge, and I'm not convinced yet.
That's basically what's in my head at the moment. The two ideas I had in the last ficwriting deadspace are still very strong, those being RariLuna and FlutterDash. The PinkieShy idea has basically taken the spot of CellyPie now that that's done. Still, I am almost positive that in reading, watching and talking in the coming weeks, I'll have far more ideas to choose from, and hopefully I'll land on one that convinces me fully from the get-go.
If you've read this far, well, damn. I thought about cramming some images in here, but I have no idea what those would be. Sprucing it up with images just to make more people read it is silly anyway. I figure people will read if they're interested, and if they are--if you are--I'm flattered.
In Other News
There's a reason for that Within and Without tag other than "hey I may write something similar." If you've problems with the downloadable formats available through FiMFiction, there's an awesome guy by name of JeffersonPeters who took it upon himself to provide a superior alternative. Here is a downloadable ePub variant of W&W/O for all your reading pleasure! I don't have a fancy reading thingermabob, but I'm told it's quite good.
It's worth noting that he used alternative cover art in the .epub file, and the artist hasn't yet responded to the request for permission to use it, but there should be a link with attribution and everything in there. The real problem, though, is that the artist's dA has been taken down since, and redirects. Still working on that.
That's it! Thank you for your time. If you hate me for abusing your eyes for italics, well, at least I didn't use comic sans. I'm gonna get around to replying to comments on TaB as soon as I can, but know that I've read them all, and that I'm floored (and thankful!) for all the comments!







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>>467724
In all this confusion, I've forgotten, myself. :B Pretty sure it was in reference to something you said somewhere.
>>430462 I can think of nothing I could possibly have done to warrant that, but thank you -- I think
Son, I am proud. :3
>>409740 I am very flattered you've read so many! In particular, I smile extra bright when I hear people read Ode, since it's a little bit special to me. I hope the rest continues to satisfy!
From what I hear about Bioshock Infinite, that's a pretty damn solid compliment there, haha. Thank you! I've actually been wanting to play the game myself, but I can't seem to find the time to sit down just yet.
>>411286 I know, sorry! Believe me, I'm really upset about it. I should have seen it coming a mile away; fact is, the next chapters need to be published together, or it'll be a really weird, awkward and nonsensical split. With those chapters, I need the epilogue, too, and while I could easily write all that in a week (I already did - I'm done), editing, collecting feedback and editing again is taking a little bit longer. I'm aiming for publishing the rest just over the weekend!
your late for the date,
update, that is, on twice as bright. (see what i did there?)
>>408643
After "twice as bright" I started from your first story and read them all now.
"Building Bridges" was very good, I could notice that it was your beginning and you writing have improved since then. Cried a bit near the end.
"Rainbow Dash's Best Plan Ever" was a nice change of pace from the story before, loved it too.
"Ode to Friendship" made me consider that Pinkie Pie is best pony

I will continue to read all stories, because you have a great way of building your stories, I love all the little things you add to your stories, that are not needed for the story, but bring the feel of a living world.
The way I see the characters before my eyes while reading your stories, is something I normally had by stories from R.A.Salvatore.
A lot of days, I was playing Bioshock Infinte (which is great), but stopped after two hours, because I wanted to know how a story of yours plays out ;-)
I think you have a gift for writing, keep on doing it.
>>402607 Hi! Thank you for your comment--I'm very glad to hear of it if you happen to enjoy Twice as Bright. I should have the next (and last!) batch of chapters out very soon, hopefully just over the weekend at the latest. I can only hope they don't disappoint.
While I don't know if I quite deserve it, you're very kind to recommend me like that; thank you very much! If you're looking for other stories of mine, Rainbow Dash's Best Plan Ever and Where Your Heart Is are the two fics that most closely resemble TaB in style, but there should be plenty to choose from in my story archive. If you can't find what you're looking for, I've favorited quite a few other stories by other authors, and I greatly recommend you check them out!
I reaaaaallly love your "Twice as Bright" story,
I will now dive in your other storys, because your writing style is so fun and well thought out.
On my deviant art page is says now:
Favorite writers
Terry Patchett and MLP Fanfics, "Twice as Bright" from Cloudy Skies is GREAT!!!
>>355891 I am worst pony at paying attention. Working through a backlog of comments now, I'm really sorry for the late reply - the simple reason for that is that I've had a bit of a new mini-hiatus.
At any rate, I'm thrilled to hear you liked TaB! Next chapters should go up tonight (no lies this time). As far as other fics go, I have to admit it's been a while since I had the [insert word] to read anything, but I'm certainly going to give it a look and, if nothing else, add it to my read-list. Thanks!
Happy to see you are back, and I hope during your hiatus you were able to find a better balance (for lack of a better word) with how you feel about your fics.
I'm enjoying Twice As Bright immensely right now as Celestia shipping outside of Twilight is near non-existent. You always do wonderful long fics with lots of character so I am always waiting on the next chapter.
On a random note as I do not know how much you read other fics, if you are interested I'd check out Temple of The Stars, it's a really interesting story that I wouldn't have been surprised to have found out you had made it.