Black Balloon is a normal pony just living her life but she's quite different from the others.......wether it be the blankness of her flank or the strange story behind her.

One day disaster strikes her town, leaving it in ruins. She makes it her goal to get through whatever troubles are in her way and find the pony who is responsible for the death of the entire village, and the only pony she ever cared for......

Slight gore and language not suitable for kids.

ShutterBug never did quite fit in and was always told by her parents she was quite the strangest pony they had ever laid eyes on. She always thought herself a freak and never did quite cope well until the big day came! She soon moved to PonyVille and tried to make good first impressions with everypony and be friendly but just as she makes some friends will their secrets separate their friendship?

I had some drawing time with a friend and drew up The 4 main characters, ShutterBug, Princess Mist, Desert Island and Zap Apple. I couldn't fit Zap in the pic though.
Characters belong to me.
MLP characters belong to Hasbro and Lauren Faust
Also:I don't want very heavy criticism. I'd prefer if you said what I had stuff I'd done was good about the story. The reason why was because I'm afraid of getting lots of criticism due to a friend never writing a story again because they where that upset about what people said.
So go easy OK?