ShutterBug never did quite fit in and was always told by her parents she was quite the strangest pony they had ever laid eyes on. She always thought herself a freak and never did quite cope well until the big day came! She soon moved to PonyVille and tried to make good first impressions with everypony and be friendly but just as she makes some friends will their secrets separate their friendship?
I had some drawing time with a friend and drew up The 4 main characters, ShutterBug, Princess Mist, Desert Island and Zap Apple. I couldn't fit Zap in the pic though.
Characters belong to me.
MLP characters belong to Hasbro and Lauren Faust
Also:I don't want very heavy criticism. I'd prefer if you said what I had stuff I'd done was good about the story. The reason why was because I'm afraid of getting lots of criticism due to a friend never writing a story again because they where that upset about what people said.
So go easy OK?
Well to be honest the story lacked some detail.
But what I did like what the concept of this story (So Far Anyways.)
Here's a Picture that will cheer you up if your story doesn't make it well (I liked it)
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1564056 thanks
The story seems good to me. Something about the beginning narration seems a bit off and there's room for editing but overall a good start. Definitely getting a thumbs up. Let this story evolve and thrive.
1574281 I know it could use editing which sucks
but thanks for the thumbs up! 
Sweet Luna that chapter was short! Longer chapter for sure for the next chapter!
~Miss Pinkamena
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I ran and ran and ran till I could run no longer.........................I ran and ran (stop) till I could run no longer
~Blitz~
eh a few spaces missing too...............