http://www.fimfiction.net/story/91775/friends-and-family#new_comment
I spent a while trying to think of what I wanted to say about this. Nothing quite came out expressing what I wished, and I'm hoping that there'll be plenty of revisions throughout this comment regardless. But I'll put this down, say my piece, and you are welcome to do what you will with it.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/57590/dear-sweetie-belle
I am...... very conflicted about this piece. It is incredibly well written, beautifully described and portrayed. I honestly felt I could see and hear everything being said, and the letter came across beautifully and felt right at home with Rarity. I was engaged and it never lost my focus throughout, so I want to say kudos and great job in writing this piece.