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Another Army Brony


One of the few Bronies in the Army, I decided to try my hand at writing down my ideas. It's been over 4 years now, and I found that I enjoy this.

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From within my dominion of storms, I survey the destruction being wrought beneath me. As the forked tongues of Eldritch power strike down at the ground below, the howl of the wind changes its timbre. There is a disturbance, an intruder within this sacred place. In the countless years I've brought forth these storms, never has any creature had the audacity to venture into their path, let alone into the very heart of such a tempest.

I must find this fearless intruder... And I must destroy it.

That was the plan, at least. Who could have foreseen this awakening, this re-emergence?

Venturing into the heart of the Tempest, indeed.

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We have the Princesses of the Day and Night, and of Love and Friendship. What about the elemental forces of Fire and Ice, of Tempestuous Skies and Roiling Seas? In this short story, I shall endeavor to personify the spirit of one elemental, who wields the power of the storm.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 8 )

Interesting so far and there were a couple of spelling errors

ducked and weqved to

should be weaved?
and this

I could read the could

I'm not sure about.

wow. yeah just wow can't even go into any detail.

2582662 Good very good. I am blown away... pun both not and is intended. I thought it without realizing it was one.

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Good to hear. I'll probably work on it more tomorrow, maybe get another chapter out this week.

2584080 sweet looking forward to it. Glad Discord isn't the only Spirit of something out there. Its one of the reasoons I liked the basis becuase there is more than just Discord: Spirit of Chaos, Celestia: (pretty much) Spirit off the Day or sun, Luna: Spirit of the night/moon, and Cadance: Spirit of Love.

Some call them goddesses or whatever but your statement of what he is is cool.

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Okay, so I've fallen a bit behind in the writing department lately, but the next chapter is nearly completed and should soon be posted. (Hopefully.) I started writing this as a testament to the majesty and unbridled power of a tempest, and it sort of crossed over with something I'd read in the past and then took on a life of its own. I think I will compile this with some other elemental being -themed stories in the future.

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