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Ghosttown Brony


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Scootaloo is a very lucky pegasus. She has two great friends who she wouldn't trade for anything, her idol is her stand-in sister and she lives in a town surrounded by ponies who care about her. But is wasn't always like this. there was a time where a good day was when nopony talked to her. A time when home was the last place she wanted to go. a time when her only family, fueled her nightmares. Scootaloo would rather forget this time but as she spends a day out with Sweetiebelle and Applebloom her memories creep through the walls in her mind. And can anypony truely ignore where they came from?

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Alright so I read it like I do with most stories that have Sweetie Belle tagged in it, and I like the idea behind this piece. But it's also quite obvious some of the mistakes you've made. I'll send you a PM detailing a lot of the stuff you can work on. Feel free to discuss it with me if you have any further questions. And thanks for writing.

This seems like an interesting story so far, and I am looking forward to how this pans out for scoots:scootangel:

keep up the good work!:pinkiehappy:

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Good work so far great story.

B>SANIC the hedgegog

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