The mane six have had their paths intertwined since they were fillies all thanks to Rainbow Dash's Sonic Rainboom, but what if Dash was not able to pull off this feat? How would this failure have shaped the lives of these ponies? With new paths to follow are their lives as fulfilling as they would have been?
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Not bad but kind of rushed and there's a big wall of text that really makes it hard to follow. You should get an editor for this.
Twixie will consider editing this.
Message her if you are interested in her help.
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God damnit, your name and pic are adorable.
I seem to like Trixie more already.
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Would you like her gweat and powaful editing skills?
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No thank you, I am a proud Grammar Nazi, but I appreciate the offer. Besides, I have a long way to go before I'm ready to publish stories.
Awesome story. So any chance of an update?
5576541 maybe, i have the second chapter completely thought out, just gotta type it all up. Its like 1/3 the way done
5577004 Cool.