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New Beginnings

When Gilda returns to Ponyville, one thing leads to another and winds up transforms the young griffon into somepony completely different, and I'm not talking about her mind!

this is my first fic, plz tell me if you enjoy

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Starblazer225

Starblazer225 #1 · Apr 20th, 2013 · 2 · · Darkness and Memories ·

Good job, for a first its really well written!
I cant wait to read more of it!

zyr1987

zyr1987 #2 · Apr 21st, 2013 · · · Darkness and Memories ·

This is a good start to an interesting idea, though you do have some spelling and grammar errors (one that pops out is the word manor when manner should have been used), but nothing too major.

The Changeling Spy

The Changeling Spy #3 · May 3rd, 2013 · · · Darkness and Memories ·

Can't tell if dead fic...

Not updated often or dead?

twilightaura

twilightaura #4 · Jun 12th, 2013 · · · Darkness and Memories ·

sorry i have not updated recently, literally a week after i posted the chapter 3 of my grades dropped in school but i will post more soon, hopefully

Grey Warden

Grey Warden #5 · Aug 19th, 2013 · · · Trust ·

The last sentence is off. The very last would should be [me] since its from gilda's point of view unless she thinks in third person. Also fluttershy smiling as gilda blacking out kind of makes me think this is a dark fic.

HarmonyRain