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So is this like, it? or am I gonna get an explanation?
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, but i still like the story ,very creative idea keep it up
im with you their man
2492979 amen
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The explanation is coming, and now that I know there are actually people curious about it, it'll come sooner than I thought it would! Thanks for the watches, folks.
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thanks for good story telling
Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! ETA?
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Beats me. I'm working on a few other stories at the same time, so I don't know when I'll come back to this one.
2500133 well i can't wait to see what else you write.
I liked up until the ending where everything just went into... What?
I'm going to like and fave, but that will change if anypony gets hurt in there (with the exception of bruises and such caused by the other ponies).
So what happens next? Why did Celestia do it? What was she protecting them from? When does the next chapter come out? Hopefully soon, I'd really appreciate it.
update?
Good story, you have me hooked. I hope you don't end it there, with such a massive cliffhanger, I really want to see where this is going to go.
Please continue!
Update?
"And we waited for that chapter for ages, but nothing happened."
"That"s terrible grandpa! That guy never updated again?"
"Not to my knowledge, but that was 54 years ago so no one remembers it anyway."
But no, seriously dude
DAT UPDATE!
This is very interesting! Most vore stories I find are very comedic and random. But here, Celestia turns Ponyville into a ghost town by swallowing the population, as if it was the only thing she could do, like somepony was going to try to hurt them. This seems like a serious story! Hope you update soon!
By the way, when Celestia told Twilight, "Let's never part again.", does that mean she plans on keeping Twilight in her stomach for the rest of her life? Still, if I were a pony, I wouldn't mind getting eaten by Princess Celestia!
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And what do you mean you have other stories that you're working on? I just checked your user page and this is the only story you have published!
If you mean you're going to publish new stories, then don't. It's never a good idea to work on multiple stories at the same time. It just makes things harder for you and your readers. So my advice: Work on this story first.
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This is not my main account. I made it to publish this story and any others I might have which are fetish or clop-related. I currently have another story in the works on that account, and a few more ideas that I haven't started yet.
I'm sorry that it's been so long since my last update, but there have been a lot of events happening in my life that I needed to take care of, and along the way I lost my passion for this story and have only recently picked it up again. I have six chapters planned and I've started work on the second one, but I haven't completely gotten back into the swing of things.
The story I'm trying to tell here is still kind of comedic and random, but it came about when I saw the current crop of vore stories the site and decided that I could do better and try harder to tell a story as well as titillate vorarephiles.
Don't suppose anyone here would mind giving me some minor plot advice? I'm a bit hung up at the moment.
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By plot advice, do you mean things you could add to later chapters? Because I can't really help you with that, since there's only one chapter here. But what I can think of that you could add later is Celestia explaining her reasons for turning Ponyville into a ghost town and eating the entire population, other than as a sign of love to her subjects, to Luna.
By the way, do you let comments go straight to you email? Because i have the feeling that you don't check on this account very often. What's the name of you main account?
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Eh, mostly advice on little details that I might be overthinking and could probably let slip anyway... or not. I've had the reason behind Celestia's actions in mind since I started this story, so there's no need to ask for advice on that account.
I'd rather not say what my other account is in public. If I was, I wouldn't bother with separate accounts at all. But if I can get a promise that you won't spread it around too much, I can send you a private message with it and what I'm currently hung up on. Sound good?
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Sure, sounds good! And I promise I won't tell anyone.
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And sorry, but I've got no advice that I could give you. I can't think of anything.
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I'd be happy to take a crack at helping you with your hang-up. Shoot me a PM, I'd like to help.
Bloody Update already!
....Sorry. My meds wore off back there, what did I do?
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Cliff and Soldat have been a huge help in getting me my motivation and inspiration back. I'll be updating as soon as I can.
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Fimfiction ate your spacing, man- I'd recommend going back and separating out all the paragraphs.
Beyond that, great work!
IS there an actual threat or is Celestia nommin' for the sake of nommin'?
Guess Celestia didn’t eat Trixie as soon as I thought she would.
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It's a secret.
3525286 Fair enough. I like the idea of vorish gluttony either way.
...Dafuq!?
The Anal vore and unbirth were aweome, but you could have left out that part in the middle withe the guard and the cake.
It was significantly tengential and unnecessary.
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Hopefully this won't be true by the time the story ends. I've got my hooves crossed.
Very interesting chapter. It really gives a little background to the story while continuing the plot. And a thumbs up for showing Celestia's cake addiction!
So it seems that the spell makes the bodies of the ponies disappear, and stores their souls in the body of Celestia, and they're also put into stasis until they're regenerated by Celestia. The ponies also seem to give Celestia a continuous amount of energy like love does for changelings. And since Spike was the first one Celestia swallowed, I'm guessing the spell isn't limited to just ponies. Am I right?
I also like how Celestia's thinking of swallowing Luna!
Really great to see another chapter by the way!
I also love the anal vore and unbirthing, though I'm more of a fan of normal vore AKA oral vore. Can't wait to see what Celestia does next!
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Since she also swallowed Zecora in this chapter, you are correct!
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Of course there's a threat.
She may be lying about the Smooze, but there is clearly an out break of something that is not necessary fatal, and also there is probably a cure for it. Which is too expensive. So as not to upset her subjects with unnecessary use of tax money, she just ate them instead.
See,
Logic
If more people used it the world would be better for it
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Hey, I just fixed the spacing issue and edited some of the first chapter, too.
So, are the citizens of Ponyville still alive in Celestia's belly, and will they ever be freed?
Oh hey, this updated.
I'm just waiting for Celestia's spell to wear off and for her to reach her TRUE size...
I also want to hear the story behind Trixie's eating contest.
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Sorry I couldn't give you your answer sooner, but it is coming, I promise.
i dont kno what to say about this not sure if im disturbed or very intrested in this but in all i like this very much and earned a fav from me