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I like this. It needs a bit of a touch-up for spelling and grammar, but it's good nonetheless.
thanks i try to keep the grammer correct but meh shit happens
this look epic but needs a little touch but other wise
thanks
2420890 why I can't find your story in my favorite list? not even in your story folder
um i dunno
Nice story, but the grammar errors kinda glared into my eyes pretty hard.
yeah still working out the kinks
2422537
If you don't already have one, get a proofreader.
Don't ask me I'm not qualified for it.
thanks i do what i can with what i have so ill try to do better
nuff said
why thank you my good man
hope next chapter comes soon
im working on it as we speak
2528184
What ever you do DO NOT rush, superior quality is INFINITY more important than rapid release of chapters!
thanks for the vote of confidence
Hmmm coming out of the imprisonment different.....I am intrigued. Other than the occasional missed capitalization it's done well.
im glad i puiqed your intrest
Alright, gotta confess something, I went to clopfics because I had that feeling, and then I saw this story which intrigued me, and so when I thought that the 1st chapter was clop...no...it was something better, a story with awesome backstory and an awesome Princess to boot, defiantly faved, who knew checking for clop would lead to such satisfying(for me that is) story...but, you need to separate the paragraphs, but I concur,
ONWARDS TO THE NEXT CHAPTER
Well that was unexpectedly expected...now let's play the waiting game
Nice Chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
good show
I shan't break our combo.
The combo ensues.
Yay, you're alive!
well I needed to take a dragon nap to make the juices flow better lol
when the next chapter coming out
having a bit of writers block but it will be done just don't know when
Hey still alive pal?
for any one who cares I am still alive but I am having some difficulty getting the chapter together what with work and writers block
3600319 well i am interested and i hope to see more
moar pls :D
More pleas.
Its alive!!!!!
lol I have risen from the grave and hopfully the next chapter wont take as long
There much for me to say about this chapter but I'm glad its back.
So this dude is taking extra time to come back, since he should've been able to break out when Q, I mean Discord, did.
So this dude is taking extra time to come back, since he should've been able to break out when Q, I mean Discord, did.
Well, I can't wait for the next chapter then. I....actually forgot how this story goes entirely
Soooooo...once I get home from work tonight....or after I sleep....matter by how I feel when I come home...in the morning....at almost 6am.....ugh....making myself sick thinking about it....but yeah, I know the feels. Same happened to me before, but it was right before Black Friday where I got a new touch screen laptop
yay
And NOOOOWWWWWW.....laptop auto updates when I told it no 50 damn times, and I lost my recent 7K words (so far) chapter....now, my last save was back at the 1K mark....
F. M. G. D. L
U. Y. O. A. I
C. D. M. F
K. N. E
And I haven't typed into it any yet cause I'm so angry....BUT I made a choice that would have changed all this, to where I only need to work on remember 1K-2K words now.
So...yeah...
LONG COMMENT SHORT
can't wait to see the next chapter, need to re-read this story at my earliest possible time, and I understand how you feel on losing chapters...
cannot wait also do not forget about a dark elf in equestria
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dude r u ever going to update? it has been nearly 2 years since u posted this
i hope the next few chapter is done and is waiting for you to post them