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The Pony Who Cried Wolf

A chance encounter with a magical beast has robbed Rarity of her most precious belonging, and has also landed her an unwanted necessity. Now she has to learn to love and to care, or she'll never be able to go back to the life she once lived. A story of laughs, tears (not really), and learning about the things we care about most.

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Ex-Nihilos

Ex-Nihilos #1 · Feb 7th, 2012 · · ·

Well not enough time to read it at the moment but you've certainly caught my attention.

Tracking for future reading pleasure.

Zay-el

Zay-el #2 · Feb 7th, 2012 · · ·

Not a bad start, though you really should consider breaking some of your text-chunks into smaller bits, for easier reading. Other than that the adrenaline rush scene seemed a little strange to me, not in a plot sense, but by how radical the change was. When you're in danger, usually it's not confidence that surfaces in any shape of form, but a desperate determination at best. Also, even with a source of light, she couldn't have seen deep enough into the cave from the very entrance, to see waterfalls inside. Nonetheless, I'd be willing to read more of this story, if you plan on continuing anytime soon.

Kartac

Kartac #3 · Feb 14th, 2012 · · ·

It's fantastic, excellent even. Rarity's characterization is right on the money and thoroughly enjoyable, your locale descriptions are wonderful as well. I look forward to reading more.

OmniscientTurtle