what now?....

Nice idea, but they don't seem to connect to well. The end always tries to start the next segment in the middle of that sentence, but often where they begin is a complete different tense, talking about a complete different thing, and the starting sentence doesn't seem to have been molded in any way to follow on from the last one.

But that's expected really. The story was pretty good to make up for it, but your nice little effect didn't quite work.

Hmm. Nice effect, though I do think some – actually, most – of the stories cut off too abruptly, without giving enough closure. (When editing, I just thought you hadn’t finished writing them yet.) I’m almost hoping you’ll eventually finish them and release them as standalone stories or something, ’cause some of them definitely deserve it. (Especially the Celestia×Luna one, oh my.)

Still, hawt and nice. And her first sun scene is still really, really sweet.

wat ._.

Ladies and Gentlemen... i presente you... the Julio Cortazar of the clopfics world mister Darf!

Loved this, both as a chapter and as an experiment. Bravo, sir. The essence of reformed Discord, using his powers for 'good'.

*Solaris and Eris are the fanon names for Rule 63 (gender-bent) Celestia and Discord

Thank you for completely shattering my immersion. I was enjoying the gimmick, too.

Let's be honest, here. If the people reading this can't figure things out through context, should they even be reading this?

very unique and enjoyable!

was interesting

"Server cannot be Found"

Awwwww...

I got a sex toy store web page. I was so shocked I just clicked out immediately so no link unfortunately.