A compilation of experimental short stories about love, sex, and the ways we think about them. Each story presents its subject matter in a unique format.
Wow Pinkie and her stream of consciousness. I got half way through and was thinking man this is a wall of text and then it hit me well duh it is Pinkie thinking in her mind and she likes to say things similar to what would look like a wall of text and I laughed. Also they are a cute couple.
What I really like about this, is that if you don't just read through that gargantuan sentence and you actually digest and interpret every section of it that COULD be a sentence, Pinkie is actually really good at introspection and describing what love means to her; it wasn't just a standard Pinkie rant that goes off on a tangent about everything else. This was really superb.
I will be honest, though; my first thought seeing the paragraph/sentence was "oh shit, this'll be fun."
Wow Pinkie and her stream of consciousness. I got half way through and was thinking man this is a wall of text and then it hit me well duh it is Pinkie thinking in her mind and she likes to say things similar to what would look like a wall of text and I laughed. Also they are a cute couple.
GAME TIME.
How much of Pinkie's thoughts can you read out loud without taking a breath?
wall of text
tl;dr
2461174 Fix it, man.
My brain hurt while trying to read this wall of text. But oh well. Altogether, it was a sweet story
2457442 I really couldn't have put this any better myself
That hurt my brain.
One monstrous paragraph, one sentence. Goddamn beautiful, you word wizard!
What I really like about this, is that if you don't just read through that gargantuan sentence and you actually digest and interpret every section of it that COULD be a sentence, Pinkie is actually really good at introspection and describing what love means to her; it wasn't just a standard Pinkie rant that goes off on a tangent about everything else. This was really superb.
I will be honest, though; my first thought seeing the paragraph/sentence was "oh shit, this'll be fun."