(Please forgive me for the horrible spelling, I've been typing this up on my iPad, stupid autocorrect. Thank you for your understanding)
Six friends head out to find the mysterious goblet of King Griffon. Though danger lurks ahead of them, will they find the treasure they've been looking for.
This story is actually written by me and my friend. For secrecy, she is called Feather. So if I may kindly present to you a Forte and Feather production.
We accept critics and comment. (Rude comments will be deleted).
Chapters (3)
This story puts me in the mind of "Stand By Me" "Indiana Jones" & "The Goonies". I guess because its a group of kids going on a adventure. It's got a nice start and a plot, if you put some character development and some drama in it may get better. But still keep it in a childlike way with dumb jokes. But thats just my opinion on it pay it no mind if you want.
When you finish this story I will give a score of what I think of this. I look forward to the rest.
...'sox'?
Griffon's
Though danger lurks ahead of them, will they find the treasure they've been looking for?
This story is written by me and my friend.
Using a pseudonym online? What a novel concept! /s How inane.
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no I like your opinion. I've lost all the roughdrafts for the whole story so I have to go over it with my friend and for the dramatic part I'll ask my other friend (who is like rarity) to help me with that
Hi, I'm not much of an editor
But maybe I can help you on your story The Griffon's Goblet. Sure sounds like an interesting title, I'll see what I can do for you.