Scootaloo's Cutie Mark

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This is the only Chapter · 5th Feb 2012 · 1,418 words
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Except for this one. · 5th Feb 2012 · 227 words
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teawiithhoney

teawiithhoney #1 · Feb 6th, 2012 · · · Except for this one. ·

Ok, 1- cutest story EVER!
2- The adorable epilouge has made it about 20% cooler
And 3- I enjoyed the double rainbow

VinylDash

VinylDash #2 · Feb 6th, 2012 · · · This is the only Chapter ·

Kinda expecting it to be longer but it wasnt a bad story. If it had a deeper plot to it...*chuckle*.....anyways, it would have been alot better but i give you a 3 star.

Mobius of the Moon

Mobius of the Moon #3 · Feb 6th, 2012 · · · Except for this one. ·

191094
If it had a deeper plot to it...*chuckle*
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IamtheBoat

IamtheBoat #4 · Feb 6th, 2012 · · · Except for this one. ·

191094 I agree with you on it should have been longer. However, when I wrote this, I originally wrote it on the FJ Pony Thread, and, as you may or may not know, there's a 2000 character cap on every post. So, I didn't consider it short when I wrote it at first. You know what I mean? Thank you kindly for the rating, it means a lot

IamtheBoat

IamtheBoat #5 · Feb 6th, 2012 · · · Except for this one. ·

191080 Allow me to begin by thanking you for your kind words. I wasn't sure how this would go over, as I heard this site was kinda...strict(?) on undeserving content?
Also, just a random fun fact, I wrote this as a bedtime story for a friend of mine on FunnyJunk (not advertising)

Samusbot

Samusbot #6 · Feb 9th, 2012 · · · This is the only Chapter ·

I'm pretty sure that getting your wings permanently enchanted to be more effective would not actually get a pegasus their cutie mark, but I'll let it pass!

IamtheBoat