When the Crystal Heart was put back into its rightful place, the Empire seemed to be at peace once again. Except for a single Crystal Pony on the outskirts of the capital city. Even with Sombra gone, this pony still suffers from terrible depression and amnesia. This one Crystal Pony has been suffering for weeks now, but the truth behind this unique disease is about to come to light...
Constructive Criticism is always welcome. Knowledge of either of my previous stories is not required.
Chapters (5)
A good story all in all. But I find the high number of italic:ed words to be slightly annoying, tone it down a little, I find myself putting weight on words that has no real/obvious importance.
Since I'm not a "professional" critic, or writer, I can't add any more constructive critique than that, heh
Other than that, it's an interesting story that I intend to follow
Is, is this a horrah fic? I think it is.
And I like it.
That, I don't...
I...
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I... Am happy. Excellent work.