• Member Since 16th Jun, 2012
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Shadow Beast


Writer of changeling OC fics. That's... pretty much it.

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Follow the story of an officer in the Hive military as she is tasked to assure the death of a changeling intruder. This stranger's power frightens and intrigues his executioner, leaving her to question her loyalties until she can discover the root of this changeling's dark abilities.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 5 )
Lyi

I didn't read the story, but, based on your title description, your grammar and sentence wordings needs a bit of work. I also think that most people wont know what an Interloper is until they read the story.

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Thanks for the feedback. I'm honestly not a fan of the descriptions and plan on reworking them soon.

Lyi

Alright, then. Perhaps I shall see it it again later.

Lyi

Hmm.. This chapter is actually very good. I shall recant my unpleasant down vote and give the story a favourite.

Lyi

Nice ending :)

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