Follow the story of an officer in the Hive military as she is tasked to assure the death of a changeling intruder. This stranger's power frightens and intrigues his executioner, leaving her to question her loyalties until she can discover the root of this changeling's dark abilities.
I didn't read the story, but, based on your title description, your grammar and sentence wordings needs a bit of work. I also think that most people wont know what an Interloper is until they read the story.
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Thanks for the feedback. I'm honestly not a fan of the descriptions and plan on reworking them soon.
Alright, then. Perhaps I shall see it it again later.
Hmm.. This chapter is actually very good. I shall recant my unpleasant down vote and give the story a favourite.
Nice ending :)