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Should be "rang out"
I laughed so fucking hard!
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Glad it got a laugh, I was shooting for a bit of brevity, a last gasp of good humor. And, even though I've said it before, thank you. I can always count on you catching the errors that slip past, and I genuinely appreciate it.
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Thanks for sharing your opinion. I recommend you continue reading, and do so carefully. All the aspects you mentioned tie into the story. Nothing is in this piece just for the sake of being there.
3340065 Just think of me as your Friendly Neighborhood Grammar Nazi!
She froze in mid motion, less then an inch from him, he could feel the heat of her breath as their eyes met in mirrored confusion, he twitched in response.
"What the hell-"
Her whisper was cut off by the cry from below.
"BEHEMOTH!! Come downstairs, you gotta huge package today an I wanna see!!"
Closing his eye for a moment, Behemoth heaved a mighty sigh at the voice of his beloved little sister ringing out from below. He attention was drawn back down by Luna's whisper, so faint he could barely hear it.
"Well, I don't know if I'd call it huge..."
He stared at her in silence as she tried not to smile, working hard to keep a look of critical appraisal centered on her face.
"I'd say its...adequate...decent, perhaps..."
She tilted her heads towards his erection, studying it with a jewelers precision. She gave it a little prod with a hoof, watching as it swayed slightly.
"It'll do. Maybe if we're real quiet, she wont know you're home, and we'll get to try it out."
"I know you're home, so don't try to be real quiet!"
"Ok, maybe she doesn't know you're awake...?"
"I know you're awake, too!!"
The both of them looked over the side of the bed, staring at the floor incredulously.
"And maybe shes a damn psychic..."
"I know what you're thinking, but I'm not a damn psychic. Hurry down, I wanna see whats so special about this great, big, massive, heavy package, I could barely handle it!"
With a groan Behemoth brought a hoof up to his face.
"Derpy! Verbage!!"
It was silent for a few seconds, after which her disembodied voice rand out again.
"I don't get what you...EW!!! Dag nabit, that is so not what I meant, that's not how I meant it at all, stop being gross!"
I find this entire dialogue sentence funny as fuck