I might read this, it seems somewhat interesting

Congratz on being the first one so far!

Sheeze... Took you long enough

It's alright, could use some work.

You, my man, are on the brink of something interesting, but I am very tired, and may not be appreciating it for what it is right now.

AWESOME!!!

Like i said during the new episode

BRING ON THE FANON

and did anybody else feel strange while watching this EP

Saw this coming a mile away.

And the daring doo fic's begin. I like the beginning and i wait for more.

i was excited for daring do fics. and here they come. as a powerful pink pony with a sword once said,

"Brace yourself. The Daring Do fics are coming."

and brace myself i shall.

Final Boss status stuff.

I'm surprised that this is the first Daring-Do fic so far. I like the beginning and I'll definitely be tracking this!

Interesting, but I think you need help with the word quiet. "the crowd got louder and quitter with the passing of the hour" should be "the crowd got louder and quieter with the passing of the hour". "Quite you fool!" Should be "Quiet you fool!". I also noticed some repetition that just makes the sentence sound funny in the beginning: "Each moment in the sun had been like a dry blast against her body by the sun". I would suggest reading what you write out loud, so you can hear how it sounds. Other than those things, you've got a good start. Looking forward to seeing more!

>>189057189057 Thank you for pointing those out, I'll fix them after work this morning.

"And thus...the first Daring Do fic has been born"

Minor typo: "This was a pony that didn’t want to be scene." Should be 'seen', other than that great setup. Can't wait for more.

*Grabs popcorn*

This is gonna be good!

haha, just watched the episode, went to check fimfiction immidiatly after

now let me read this while falling asleep

Here we go!!

Here comes to the Daring-Doo fan-fictions that will be perfectly made and the other shitty unoriginal ones.

After watching the episode I knew it was only a matter of time until this would happen, don't over-blow this out of the water like Fallout: Equestria and Past Sins. (A.K.A Overrated.)

I bucking called it! I knew there was going to be a fanfiction within a day of the last episode. I BUCKING CALLED IT!

>>191223191223 In all fairness I actually had this up yesterday before Fimfiction had Daring Do as a selectable character.

.... Did it really take you this long to make this fic? A whole day? Really? Pff, I'm shocked. Well, with the mods, I guess I shouldn't be surprised.

people ask why I love this fandom so much.

I show them this in response.

Well played sir, well played.

Well, we got a new kind of story now.  Might as well enjoy the Daring Do flood.

  How can you not enjoy it?  It's Daring Do!

  Hey!  Breaking the 4th wall is my job Dashie!

Sounds like Knight is Fluttershy's ancestor.... or whoever is Fluttershy's equivalent in this universe.  (After all, Daring Do is an alternate Rainbow Dash)

You Crazy writer you!! I will definitely read this!

idk how but i just knew that someone would write a fanfic with daring-do in it...

This kind of fic, Daring Do, I COMPLETELY expected to be created.

I knew it, I totally, totally knew it. Within a day of the new episode, FLOODS of Daring Do fanfiction. AND I WILL READ THEM ALL!

I'M AN EGG HEAD!

>>191048191048 though i can't vouch for past sins, fallout:equestria is the greatest piece of pony fanfiction ive ever read.  i dont feel like going into why it's great. im lazy. but just because you didnt like it doesnt mean its overrated. >>191237191237 im excited for new chapter!! yayyy! lol

A few punctuation issues that need to be fixed, otherwise a good read.

i like havent seen the latest episode but i like it

>> Supermucher fallout: equestria is indeed a great fic and it is my favorite of that genre of fics so i agree

I knew this was going to happen and I'm okay with this.

"the crowd got louder and quieter with the passing of the hour"

Is this some ancient Zen riddle or something?

>>191842191842

Trust me, there is loads of reasons why I don't like Fallout: Equestria. There are loads of people who don't like Fallout: Equestria and I'm one of them.

I'm not going into detail with it though.

Six friends..... Hmm, familiar number...... I wonder where I've heard it beforeeee

I thought i was the first

i was wrong

Nice story though

*gasp* On A Cross and Arrow!

Well, something similar

YAY!!!!! Daring Do fanfic!!!

>>192231192231 When large crowds of people gather it will be very loud at times then for some reason it'll get very quiet and rise again. Its a common thing, at least around me

Now, if only they would release movie sequels as fast, my world would be complete.  :lunasmile:

I knew right from the start that there would be Daring Do fanfics...

But then again: Who didn't?

YES!   Looking forward to a lot more of Daring Do.  Good start!

Definitely on my track/favories :D looks very promising

I'd have been a fool to not see this coming. The second I realized the direction "Read It and Weep" was taking with its narrative, I knew it'd be a matter of days - hell, hours - until Daring Do found her way into one-shot adventure stories. How I managed to dodge all of them until today is beyond me, but by last count there are already fifteen stories with her newly-christened tag plastered onto them (some older stories having just updated their tags to include her).

And this fic is the reason it's a GOOD thing Daring is perfect bait for new stories.

im likin it!

nothin like a good pony version of indiana jones!!

It seems that one way to have a story get a lot of views and comments within three days is by making it a Daring Do adventure, and rightfully so, because she's awesome!

Now, on to my review - I am really liking this so far, and I think you've implemented Daring Do's character really well!  

I'll be keeping an eye out for updates!

Nice work.  I'm interested in seeing where this goes.  You did a good job crafting a legend that would fit well into Equestrian folklore.

And for the record: Past Sins was an excellent fanfiction!

I remeber that

Exceptional

AWESOME!!!!!!!

I love indiana jones. i love ponies. to get a mixture of the two, and still be canon is amazing!

daring do: "I sense no danger here"

lol

When RD was reading the sequel at the end of the episode I was like, "HASBRO WHY U NO MAKE DARING DO BOOKS?!"

You, kind sir, have done a great thing.

Large empty cave that is home to Celestia knows what? I'mma risk it.

This is wonderful!

The more that I know about Daring Do, the more that it reminds me of, not Indiana Jones but Lara Croft instead.

really like it and ive started reading in rainbowdash's voice

Liking this so far, can't wait to see more! :D

Yes. Just yes.

Is it just me, or is Daring Do incredibly super hawt?

I'm going to enjoy this.

FIRST!!

yay

anyway...

good story

i am intrigued

keep em coming

that is all

kthanxbai

Wow this is getting big keep it up ^^

That's why I hate little kids

Hope you're able to continue writing, I'm already enjoying this.

Yarr! Everythings better with pirates!

This is a nice concept, although there are still a whole ton of proofreading and formatting errors. To be honest, those are so thick that it's pretty hard for me to enjoy the story. I did still enjoy it, though, but you should get some editor / reviewer people to help you revise the hell out of this one. Until then, I'll hold off with the stars.

>there was hardly time for that in her life, for there was always the next adventure.

Booooooooooo... This had better change in later chapters and/or stories! *shakes paw*

Hmm....first the dragon, and then Desert Storm.  Well, I guess that's the thing when you go it alone like Daring;  you have to sleep.

A lot of people are doing things right in front of Daring's sleeping eyes.

>>225503225503 You aren't a fan of an a-sexual Daring Do?

My editor has been swamped with life and sadly if I spent my time editing my own work I'd never get new chapters out since I'd spend all my time re-writing what I've already written so please bare with it till I can find an editor I can trust implicitly.

I have to say that I absolutely love this story so far, and simply can not wait for the next chapter!

>>193739193739 I'm curious as to why you're under the impression this is a oneshot.

>>352993352993 Okay, maybe not one-shot as in just one chapter and it's over, but from what I've seen (not that I've really looked very hard), the authors of these stories don't write MORE Daring stories. Which, when I think about it, I'm not sure I can fault them for.

Or we just say I misspoke when I used the term, because I can't be held accountable for my thought processes a month and a half ago.

>>353769353769 I didn't mean it as a one-chapter and it's over type of story as well. Once this story is done there will be more Daring from me

Awaiting the next update, this is leading in a really great direction!

Oh hey, I thought this was dead. Cool!

Wow thats all i can say...i could almost image seeing this first hand, your visual and physical descriptions are amazing im looking forward to the next chapter ^^    

Brohoof for a great chapter and story /)

Slight mistake here:

Daring tried to break content with that massive eye,

I think you meant 'contact'.

Wow, It's great to see that there is some brony who did not give up on daring do. Epic chapter by the way!

This story is getting better and better with every given chapter!!! I applaud you for such an awesome fanfic!

May i use Dry Pages in my stories and may i make a story that begins where this one ends?

Nice to see it finally update, I little too descriptive if you ask me, taking out an adjective here and there would make it very smooth. I like the turn it's taking

Oh GOD that's good writing.

Excellent!

Dry Pages!?

Holy Crap, I didn't see that coming.

Great to see this story hasn't died!

awesome!!!!

0__0  Dam you cliff hangers

And then the story died again. Well, hope springs eternal.

Did not see that coming Next chapter please