i am thatguy44 but i forgot my password
Long ago about 1 million years before Celastia there was nothing but chaos.So a group of brothers and sisters came together to restore balance and 500 thousand years later chaos came again.but now there is nothing but order and harmony so the group must restore balance by killing one of the most powerful beings on the planet.[I'm gonna say this i am thatguy44 but i forgot my password and any how this is my second fic ive written and i am looking for critisizm
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Now, which character is based on me again?
SHADOW DANCER yet i still dont know why i based her off of you and your not actually based off of her i got her from you such as i got SHADOWSHIFTER from myself
204019 that makes so much more sense now, Wait, IM THE THING THAT ATE A MANTICORE?!!! or am I the little one.?!
so, I am pretty much the little sister?
the little one ate the manticore and really they are not really savage but hungry
and you did read chapter 2 right.........if you did read harder
to all that are reading this im out of ideas well i have some but cant decide sooooooooo i need your help plz send me some ideas any and all are welcome
204504 so, I'm Shadow?
204642 Shadow Dancer
the unicorn is Shadowshifter
Shadow Dancer is the alicorn have you not read chapter 2 yet
? silly, I don't excatly know what you are talking about, the little one is based on me or the big one? simple: just say big or small. Sister or Brother.
still didnt awnser my question if you read chapter two or not and your the little one, the sister, Shadow Dancer
207394 thx. I like my brother so far, I thought this was AWESOME!
*SO AWESOME VOICE CRACK*
now, you need to have a little more events in the next chp, like, someone breaks a hoof or fore leg, maybe even wing or horn, anyway, its gotta be bada** kinda like for the brother, maybe add some romance between others.
206763 AWESOME! im an ALICORN!
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if you didnt notice shadow dancer ate scootalu in a hungry blood rage but im not sure of where to go from here
215352 I ate scootaloo?
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yes i made you eat Scootalu
what do I look like anyway?. I thought this was good, really good, tops ALL of my stories combined, I like how I changed my look, and how.... wait a min, am I the only alicorn in the family?
215604 oh.
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well you are of course a Alicron and you are a few inches taller than Luna and Shadowshifter is a Unicorn and is a few inches taller than Shadowglider who is a few inches taller than Celly and Shadowglider is a pegasus and Shadow STone is a burly earth-pony that is a few inches taller than Shadow Dancer
P.S. unintentually I made the younger siblings names two words and the older siblings names one word
217662 my brain is full of crap rn
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their demons they make no sense what so ever and not to mention they got some pretty badass moves
227736 we r demons?
i have read chp 2.
no we r not demons but think
demons love chaos reread my intro and piece it together
u know we r kind of demons cause to get the power the Shadow siblings have you have to absorb a demon and im rambling again
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Put me in!
My personality is really hyper (DONT MAKE ME A PINKIE PIE!) And I kinda act like Spike :L
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im thinking of canceling......or completely redoing it
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;O
I know you're reworking this, but I just wanted to mention that you misspelled "Celestia", among other words, in the description. You should read the blogs I've been posting on writing, as they might help you...