No longer able to handle the stress of being a Wonderbolt, Soarin goes on a break and heads to Ponyville. While he's there, he comes across Rainbow Dash at a party and the two start to become more fascinated with each other. ANTHRO.
Love the fic, very good storyline, everything. But I've noticed typos and grammatical errors all over the place, I'd suggest gettig someone to edit your stories.
I'm really liking this story. I'm not normally a fan of the anthro characters, but you do a very good job with them. And damn Dash, you can remember to remind the stallion to not cum inside when your plastered out of your mind, but now when you're sober? Still hot as hell!
Indeed.
Caught by a shy pegasus.
Lol!
Oh snap
Good story, and at the end caught in the middle of the act. Keep making more this story is great I'm liking and watching you
OMG I can't wait to read chapter 6 . when is it coming out I'm so exited
2547970 I'm aiming for this weekend!
Love the fic, very good storyline, everything. But I've noticed typos and grammatical errors all over the place, I'd suggest gettig someone to edit your stories.
I'm really liking this story. I'm not normally a fan of the anthro characters, but you do a very good job with them. And damn Dash, you can remember to remind the stallion to not cum inside when your plastered out of your mind, but now when you're sober? Still hot as hell!
~SolidFire
She isnt fat XD
This was.......pretty......
HahahaI can only imagine what they'll say!
Should be fastest.