No longer able to handle the stress of being a Wonderbolt, Soarin goes on a break and heads to Ponyville. While he's there, he comes across Rainbow Dash at a party and the two start to become more fascinated with each other. ANTHRO.
Either way this story is coming along really well. I like what your going with it. Only thing I saw in this chapter was here ( “Wow! I can’t believe Spitfire you take a vacation! She’s so, how should I put it, intense.” Dash said.) You forgot let in between Spitfire and you. Still great story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
*clears throat* who drinks Black Coffee when they have a hangover? It makes the headaches worse! The headache is caused by a lack of well water, this causes the brain to shrivel up (slighlty) which causes the pain. Drinking Caffiene makes it shrivel up more! Causing more pain, the best way to get rid of the headache is to drink lots and lots f water to re-hydrate your system!
2426140 I don't drink, so I just went off what I've heard. As for the turtle/tortoise dilemma, I thought Rainbow kept calling Tank a turtle in that episode, I could be wrong though.
Well, that was short, but fangirl Rainbow Dash...
Yeah, she'll be happy to be with Soarin'
0.0 Yay ^0^
2418833 It's not over yet!
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I know, but the way Dash is being, she basically wanted to have Soarin' all to herself. And an immediate end would mean she got her wish.
Either way this story is coming along really well. I like what your going with it. Only thing I saw in this chapter was here ( “Wow! I can’t believe Spitfire you take a vacation! She’s so, how should I put it, intense.” Dash said.) You forgot let in between Spitfire and you. Still great story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
2419937 Thanks for pointing that out! I'll make a quick edit.
*clears throat* who drinks Black Coffee when they have a hangover? It makes the headaches worse! The headache is caused by a lack of well water, this causes the brain to shrivel up (slighlty) which causes the pain. Drinking Caffiene makes it shrivel up more! Causing more pain, the best way to get rid of the headache is to drink lots and lots f water to re-hydrate your system!
*cough-Tortoise-cough*
2426140 I don't drink, so I just went off what I've heard. As for the turtle/tortoise dilemma, I thought Rainbow kept calling Tank a turtle in that episode, I could be wrong though.
2427546 she called him a tortious by the end...
2430347 I suppose you're right, might make an edit
I wounder it celestia saw because remember she watches EVERYTHING
2443454 She Probably Couldn't See For The Lights But She Was Staring Straight At Them
2493001 Anthro fan? Good!
Well that went from casual to serious in ten nanoseconds flat...