When I met Twilight Sparkle, I knew that we would become good friends. Wait...more than just good friends. We would become sisters. And we did. We never parted ways. But then she got ill, and didn't act like herself anymore.
Eternity is something that can never be reached. Even Equestria's princesses won't live forever. The end, however, comes much sooner than anypony expected.
Well, spelling error aside it was pretty good. A quite somber atmosphere and darker undertones. Could have a bit more detail, but that is probably just a personal opinion of mine. I do know what that thoughtless wandering feel like when one is visiting a grave.
I'm so sorry but: WHAT THE HELL DID THE GRIFFINS DO???
Beatiful Story. Sad, but heartwarming .
2446236 Thank yo. Yeah, i must say i got a little bit of liquid pride in my eyes when i wrote this actually. Yes, i am a little bit sappy
The words written on his cross spoke great volumes and great truth. But also he died a hero. Beautifully touching fanfic my friend. Sad yet beautiful.
2468103 Thank you so much for your kind words
It means a lot that a writer with your skill likes something i've written
The feels! This gave me so many feels.
2516511 That's what the story is supposed to do
THE FEELINGS!!!
2634525 Well, that was the point with the story.
And thanks for the fav.
This was amazing. Liquid pride was shed
2937166 Thanks for the kind words
And it seems that most bronies are actually the sappy type
2407445 They yelled at Pinkie and Fluttershy.
should perhaps be flies or flew there instead.
Well, spelling error aside it was pretty good. A quite somber atmosphere and darker undertones. Could have a bit more detail, but that is probably just a personal opinion of mine. I do know what that thoughtless wandering feel like when one is visiting a grave.
Short and bittersweet.
4223723 will fix that right away.
Thank you for you help.