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It's been a year since that dreadful day he passed away. Twilight goes to the cemetery to visit his grave.

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I'm so sorry but: WHAT THE HELL DID THE GRIFFINS DO???
:flutterrage:

Beatiful Story. Sad, but heartwarming :ajsleepy:.

2446236 Thank yo. Yeah, i must say i got a little bit of liquid pride in my eyes when i wrote this actually. Yes, i am a little bit sappy :raritywink:

The words written on his cross spoke great volumes and great truth. But also he died a hero. :fluttercry: Beautifully touching fanfic my friend. Sad yet beautiful.

2468103 Thank you so much for your kind words :yay:
It means a lot that a writer with your skill likes something i've written :twilightblush:

The feels! This gave me so many feels.

2516511 That's what the story is supposed to do :twilightsheepish:

THE FEELINGS!!!:fluttercry::raritydespair::raritycry::fluttershyouch::fluttershbad::applecry:

2634525 Well, that was the point with the story. :pinkiecrazy:
And thanks for the fav.:twilightsmile:

This was amazing. Liquid pride was shed :raritycry::fluttercry::applecry:

2937166 Thanks for the kind words :twilightsmile:
And it seems that most bronies are actually the sappy type :rainbowhuh:

2407445 They yelled at Pinkie and Fluttershy. :fluttercry:

Cadence flied me

should perhaps be flies or flew there instead.

Well, spelling error aside it was pretty good. A quite somber atmosphere and darker undertones. Could have a bit more detail, but that is probably just a personal opinion of mine. I do know what that thoughtless wandering feel like when one is visiting a grave.

Short and bittersweet.

4223723 will fix that right away.
Thank you for you help.

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