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Appleloosan Psychiatrist


dude i'm so good at nfts they used to call me "the blockchain ballerina"

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Hell yeah, something to look forward to for later :heart:

That title is a little straight forward...

Who else but Appleloosan Psychiatrist?

AP never fails to make me kinda feel bad about fapping to shit.

On one hand, this is hot. On the other, I feel like Anon here has broken young Scootaloo's mind permanently, and that's a bit creepy to me. It doesn't help that the description of Sweetie's first time is a bit rape-y since she's been inhaling human/pony scent for hours and probably isn't a hundred percent herself.

I'm not sure how to feel about this.

I'll wank anyways.

DAMN YOU APLOOSAN PSYCHIATRIST

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Exactly how I feel. But I enjoyed it nonetheless.

Hey! I remember this story! It always left me a bit conflicted: one the one hand, it's really hot.
On the other hand, the human comes across as a total creep whom I want to throw from the nearest tall building.
Good clop material either way I suppose.:duck:

knighty
Site Owner

'bout time this was posted

Ah, another great story from AP :yay:

2342803
wise men know well enough what monsters scootaslut makes of them

Well, at least this time nopony can complain that they weren't warned.:rainbowlaugh:

Good read. I heavily enjoyed reading this, your portayal of Scootaloo here is too much for me too handle. So crazy and willing to please; Filly or Mare, I loved how you wrote her here. I really liked the little nod about her Cutie Mark, funny little touch. Kinda feel that Sweetie played absolutely no role in this other than to just... be here. Sure she had her virginity taken and was ravaged shortly after, but she was absolutely overshadowed by Scootaloo. Even though Sweetie is worst CMC, I would've enjoyed seeing a bit more of her.

I also appreciate how you kept up the carnal tone of the story with Sweetie's scene (after Anon got her goin' of course).

'nother great job, AP. Even if it's old.

2343316

True words indeed.

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b-but I warned them last time, too! :fluttershysad:

Yay! Thanks for finally bringing this over!

Since this is only a few days after I mentioned it on your user page, I therefore take full credit for this story being posted.


You're welcome, all. :pinkiecrazy:

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You get credit for the final push. Other people have been asking for a while. :scootangel:

I'm sure i've read this before... Did you post it somewhere else before now? I would swear it was here on fimfiction, but i thought reposting was against the rules. Unless you rewrote it and that's why it seems familiar?

2344127
Close enough for me! :twilightsmile:

I've been meaning to ask darf if you had work elsewhere. You're damn good at this, clop and not.

Points for honesty, I guess.

Comment posted by Atlas_Nebula deleted Mar 30th, 2013

I don't understand the emphasis on condoms. They're different species, so no one is getting pregnant. (Despite this, the condoms are referred to specifically as "contraceptives" at one point.) Disease isn't even mentioned once as a reason to wear them, and even if it were a factor, it could be waved away with magic (just like magic was used so the human would be able to have sex all night long). Don't get me wrong, I liked the story; I'm just a little confused about that element of it.

sequel please.

What kind of sick bastard writes a second person clop.
Gross!

Conflicted but wth still liked and read it.:twilightblush:

There is something about the 2nd person point of view that makes this more erotic than I think it would have been you written in a different format. It's pretty awesome because I use to think the 2nd person point of view was either too hard write in or not worth it - now I see I'm totally wrong.

And I utterly love Slutaloo. Her dressed up as a dog was just hot as fuck. Not enough Sweetie Belle :unsuresweetie:, but still hot. Thanks for sharing this.

Sorren #33 · Mar 30th, 2013 · · 21 ·

Am I allowed to get mad that this is featured? Author, I am not mad at you, because I doubt you expected this all.

But Jesus fucking Christ. Fuck you Fimfiction user base.

Fuck. You.

2344694 Don't you have to be stupid somewhere else? Like on your own stories?

Mikey likey.

2345360 Don't blame it on Knighty.

Nope.

2345297 thank you, thank you. yes, I am to blame.

2342803 think of it this way, just because you play a FPS doesn't mean you want to kill the Russians...

This was a revolting story that has got to be a low point of this whole fandom.

More please. :twilightsmile:

i.imgur.com/hUbrTHX.gif

This is what I hope my clops will look like at some point. Learnin from the best.

...I'm sorry, but... did you just post a story encouraging pedophilia? :applecry:

darf #43 · Mar 30th, 2013 · · 4 ·

2345297
you're the one who wrote tentacle porn a couple days ago and had that featured
do you have a problem with this story other than the fact that it's unashamed about the content of its prose?
or are you just a cockbag?

2345383
I was actually implying that seeing the attention it got (it got knighty to comment as well as controversy attracts views after all) and half a decent rating, it's not really a surprise this got featured.

Sorren #45 · Mar 30th, 2013 · · 13 ·

2345650 Problem Mr. High and mighty attention whore?

I'm tired of seeing second person anons fuck ponies.

2345297 Flics like this drag this site down big time. If this is what's considered "A Feature Story" then Mano's: The Hands of Hate is the greatest horror movie ever made.

darf #47 · Mar 30th, 2013 · · 7 ·

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with you being sanctimonious about something written to fulfill a singular purpose being 'problematic' when it's featured? yes. especially because it's downright hypocritical. the door swings both ways. if you want people to enjoy your porn, why aren't they allowed to enjoy other people's porn?

2345806
this is like saying moving content can't exist in any medium because less 'thought-provoking' stuff does. for every story like this in the featured bar, there are ten thousand other 'fluttershy eats a pineapple' or whatever inane premise is the fancy of the week, and simultaneously just as many (well, maybe not in an even percentage, but anyway) stories that engage readership and ask thought provoking questions.

unless the problem you have is with the subject matter itself, in which case any argument would devolve in to 'fictionalized foal-sex is wrong' 'no it isn't'.

you'd still be retarded though.

Sorren #48 · Mar 30th, 2013 · · 12 ·

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if you want people to enjoy your porn,

I don't want people to enjoy it. I write it because I enjoy it. I wrote it because I wanted to write it.

And, alas, people are allowed to enjoy whatever the fuck they damn well please, but that doesn't mean I have to be happy about it. It disgusted me that my story was featured. Sure the attention was nice, but the fact that something as fucked up as was my story made the box really hurt my conscious.

darf #49 · Mar 30th, 2013 · · 7 ·

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you are an upsetting self-defeating conundrum of a human being if you believe any of what you just wrote

Sorren #50 · Mar 30th, 2013 · · 12 ·

2345867 You obviously have no morale or sense of being Mr. I-take-commisions-for-stories.

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