• Member Since 24th May, 2012
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Maple Sunset


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Clop isn't really my thing. But have a thumb for cute picture and good writing.:twilightsmile:

the fuck......O_o doesnt this count as molestation? im sure the princess would be pleased :trollestia:

...you will never make him sound reasonable... TO THE MOOOOOOOOOON BEY-YATCH!:trollestia:

1113570 I'm surprised you missed this...

She brought it over, and bit into her shirt, hoping the surprise her moans

Surprise her moans? I hope that is supposed to be suppressed...

EDIT: Maybe irking a certain user isn't the greatest of ideas.... Please don't kill me!

Your grammar needs work. :trixieshiftright:

Celestia would be so proud, and then she would be pissed because see didn't do the job:rainbowlaugh:. Good fic

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and that is what I thought while reading.

Surprise:rainbowhuh: I think he meant surpress

1114452 So you only hop onto a story to post a Scoot' meme? Seems legit...
Don't worry though, I'm kidding. I've seen enough of your work to know that you wouldn't miss a thing. :scootangel:

1114671 Just realized, I sound like a complete stalker...
Um, please don't kill me! I'll leave you alone! I swear!

i Noticed you said they started warring the clothes today the start of the week and that today was the end of the week

I don't mind clop, unless it's involving fillies, because that is just weird. Anyways, you get a like because it's rare that I see something like this that I read to the end. (In other words it's good!) :unsuresweetie:

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I have no idea what you mean:twilightblush:
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I only have one with Scootaloo. The other two I have no idea.
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If people knew, I'd be in jail already xD
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I can't believe I missed that. Will edit it once I get the chance though. Good eyes :rainbowhuh: thanks for informing me of the error :rainbowkiss:
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But mr. Hansen, what are you doing on a foalcon page? :pinkiegasp:
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Oh, and no killing is to be permitted on fimfiction grounds xD. Lest we have all the admins hunting all of us down one by one :pinkiehappy:
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That's one he'll of a mistake I made there. On well, no use taking care of it now. Will see if I can edit it once I'm back :yay:

1115738 Awww that sucks

And I'm kinda scared that we might be having the same dreams because I think I might be in jail too :twilightsheepish:

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You....didn't stop me? Isn't that equal to being an accomplice to rape?
Or are there loopholes that I'm not aware of:pinkiecrazy:
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To be in jail for something that makes you write foalcon fics, I'm pretty sure we won't enjoy our jail time :pinkiecrazy:

A little rushed maybe, but aa'ight. :scootangel: Like.

Methinks I should add my own clop to foalcon...

doesent matter had sex? :scootangel:

1116548 If your trying to say I don't know the difference then your wrong when I text instead of putting you're I save time by putting your because the ' is hard to find and I don't have to waste unnecessary time trying to find it so it's not really a punctuation error:ajbemused:

dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Derpy_Hooves.png Wasting my time with your nonsense

Enjoy the rest of your day :pinkiehappy:

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1114999 My reaction: :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: ( I'm so going to pony hell though... But, who the hell cares!? )
*Walks off, whistling the whole while when, all of a sudden...*1116548

:rainbowderp: media.tumblr.com/tumblr_ln7ghvUWqI1qdum5r.gif
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This is how I die!

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Oh, you silly pony... :pinkiecrazy: Don't tell!!

1117192 It is what I use to save time I was leaving a comment not writing a story so I don't have to worry about punctuation or grammer of any typre.............Unless I'm giving advice. :pinkiesmile:

It's a error that was meant to happen. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Pinkie_Pie.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Pinkie_Pie.png

1117227 >I was leaving a comment not writing a story so I don't have to worry about punctuation or grammer of any typre
>I don't have to worry about punctuation or grammer
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1116632 Really lonely island. Well since we are there. I guess you jizzed in your pants.:rainbowlaugh:

:1119689 no comment.... Oh wait yes I do have a comment. Why man why

Pick a tense please. :twilightsmile:

Bloody cute, this.

No build-up, though.

I like it :pinkiehappy:

Hmmmm... Oh! I know how display how I feel about a Fic. OVERUSED GIF!

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well then :pinkiegasp: .............................................:scootangel:

My first reaction. What the actual firetruck is wrong with the eyes in the picture?

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My reaction as well when I found the picture
It still creeps me out til this day

I'm jealous. Candy colored Equines are better at math than I am. :ajsleepy:

Oh, and I guess that other part was good too. Just wish there was more math help. :scootangel:

You know, honestly, that was a well written fiction. perhaps a bit too rushed on the clop part but it was decent in its shortness...as decent as can be for its content. :ajsmug:

no condemnation here, a writer is a writer and art is art. It was a lovely piece, I think I'll check in and see if you have any others.

Well, that certainly was different. Enjoyable...but different. The hanky-panky could have been drawn out a little bit more though. Pretty good story overall. I look forward to reading more from you in the future. Keep up the great writing!

Can't say this is bad but the pacing up to and during the climax (heh) was faster than a rabbit that was lit on fire.

Or in otherwords, that escalated quickly.

Hmm.... now what am I going to do with this erection?

It's gone, thank you Nick.

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