Set a number of years after the events of show canon, in a slightly darker reimagining of the show's Equestria, this fanfiction follows the story of one young mare tasked with taking on the role of Equestria's greatest hero: The Mysterious Mare-Do-Well. This fanfic is a dark but (hopefully) entertaining, comicbook-like delve into the life of a superhero in Equestria. Feedback is greatly appreciated, although please bear in mind that this is my first foray into fanfic-writing, so I'm still an amateur at present.
Chapters (7)
im surprised that no one has commented on this story, as its pretty good...i didnt see anything overtly wrong with it, save maybe the idea that Featherweight turned into a bad guy, but that just my opinion...
still no comments? that is unusual...i certainly hope the next chapter of this story comes soon, there r many loose ends yet to be tied...
well, thats interesting...though i dont think that Mare Do Well is gone to darkness quite yet...rise now....Crusaders...
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Well... that was an abrupt way to end it.
Please tell me at least Sweetie Belle somehow managed to survive that, it would totally suck if she didn't and Scootaloo's sacrifice was for nothing.
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Let's just say that I decided to leave it open-ended for a sequel, which I have planned. Keep your eyes peeled..
I like the story so far! I think that having Rainbow as the new Mare-do-well is a really good idea, and having Scoots follow in her footsteps is genius!
Ohhhhh, stuff's getting real! You know, in all the horror (I think this counts, right?) fanfics I've read, this is the first one where Octavia is nutters. It's a nice change (even though there's killing)
Five out of five mustaches for you!
NA NA NA NA NA NA NA NA MARE-DO-WELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Anyhow, thank you again for the kind words and those moustaches! 
N'awwwww, thank you ever so much! I did think that having Octavia as a bit of a lunatic would be an interesting idea, so I guess I'm not the only one then.
its like a comic book. i love it. nice origin story and pace. great work.
You should add the sequel story under that sequel list. It's basically another box with the title Sequel and the story for it. It's technically suppose to show the total number of sequels- I think- but it doesn't show it sometimes.