Queen Chrysalis has been thrown out of Canterlot and has landed in the harsh Northern Mountains. There she meets with the one thing she fears above all else... her mother. The legendary Madora is ready to return to Equestria and crush it beneath her hoof. The changelings under Madora's command are far more aggressive, not only devouring the love around them, but killing any and all who stand in their way.
After narrowly escaping a raid on her town, a young filly makes a wish on some shooting stars, asking for someone who will save them from destruction. Little does she realize, her wish has come true.
Chapters (30)
Well. Description and prologue are interesting.
Faved for trackin'&upvoted.
Rated for everyone, so no gore, amirite?
Two words: Looks promising. Great start. Instant favorite.
This was so good, two words couldn't contain it.
2296587 it wont so much br "gorey" as it is "gruesome"... If that makes sense.
It wont be Cupcakes, i can promise that.
Cant wait for the next chapter, good job!
Crossover with...?
Sephiroth!!!
I have a question what is this a crossover of.
2311529 thinking back, i dont know if anyone would really know where the characters are from.
They are from a book called Requiem
Yet another fic...
I understand that the princesses might want to alter a person's appearance for safety's sake. But I rarely see the fic that shows the human protesting and getting threatened by it. It's a question of the "slippery slope". If they can change my body, what else can they change? Because apparently they are more than willing to do it.
I mean if you said it was an advanced illusion where body movement is translated into the illusion moving, I'd be surprised but not threatened. To physically change someone's body on the other hand seems to be incredibly invasive.
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I actually never thought of that, and you bring up a very good point. I'll make sure to remember that and maybe use it
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I am sorry, I made the previous post look like a rage. I assure you I am not hating on your fic, I just always try to bring this idea up so that fanfic-dom will not fall into a rut. Like Applejack's fanfic created Lie Detector ability or the princesses being gods.
wow, great idea to do something that not many others tried (or even thought) to make! Great Story! you get 5/5 mustaches!
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Thanks!
Shouldn't this have the 'human' tag?
I require MOAR!!!!!
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They are only hunan up until the most recent chapter, so i figured it was unneeded. Should i add it?
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The human tag is for anything involving humans, If it has a human in it, it needs the tag. Not to be annoying or anything, just facts and statistics and things such as this, I am slightly OCD towards.
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Dont worry, you didnt cone across as annoying. As this is my first fic, im still getting used to setting things up properly
*laughing evily* Evil.. hehe.. laughs make everything.. hehe.... well I don't know.*still laughing evilyI
Require MOAR!!!!!
I am enjoying this story, and that reference
When Dante said "I can't tell the difference betwen their face and their ass" I could not stop laughing!
Anyways good work.
this need way more views
Glad you like it
Shall we continue?
Well dis requires... MOAR!!!
This was interesting.
Blood, pointy bloody sharp needles of Death.
*Engaging Bloodlust*
Oooh wa~wa, blood I need it.
Do I scare thee?
2299390 your right but he might have a different name because there no crossover tag and no hint that it is one
2311995 yeah Tia and Luna are off character
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i can assure you that Sephiroth is nowhere in the story's universe (although it'd be pretty awesome)
As well, i do know i got Celly and Luna pretty off. In the sequel to this, they will probably get as few scenes as possible
Modern English, Luna. It's not that hard
2321344 if you were to hear my evil laughs, one could scare or confuse you and the other is stereotypical
FBI is watching you
*wiggles eyebrows*