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Carrot Cake is starting to think that his wife is hiding something. After reading an old book about myths and monsters, he starts to see strange quirks in her behavior that he never noticed before. Obviously there's a reasonable explanation for all of this, right? She couldn't really be a changeling...could she?
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While medically I find those fainting spells when worried hillarious (in the way that makes one feel guilty afterwards mind you). I also find it interesting to see this either huge misunderstanding or a well played changeling act. Though if Ms.Cake is a changeling, whats to say that pinkie isn't one either?
wow this is good maybe you could give us more back ground and split it up more
2297118 ...she is pinkie that is your answer
She's pregnant! Right? Man I do not remember when their kids were born, bad memory and all that. Seeing as how they weren't mentioned I can assume that's what it is. Or she's a changeling who fell in love with Mr. Cake, and THEN got pregnant, and is trying to hide her secret
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Ah, this interests me. This interests me very much
I like your writing style, it's cute and very funny to read
The idea that Carrot has a medical condition is interesting. I'm curious to see what you do with it.
an interesting start, I'll put it on read latter for now.
2297153 lol, a couple grubs like Shining Armors running around.
Ok, this has the potential to be quite good... but how the heck did it get into the feature box with only 10 ratings?!
I cannot, for the life of me, find any rhyme or reason to the feature box.
2297359 Because it has zero downvotes and a lot of views out of the starting gate.
2297432 But I've seen that with lots of stories! I saw some from authors I follow that had 50-0 or greater likes/dislikes and still weren't featured!
I suspect communist infiltration! Spies! Robots! Robot communist spies! I must waterboard everyone to find the TRUTH!!
2297473 Also, it has to be above 4K and it has to get all of those things (and comments) in a short window of time.
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A fun start. Let's see who, if anyone, is the changeling here!
2297475 Well that doesn't seem like a very reliable rating method, then. It'd be easy for me to gather a couple dozen people I know and have them all like my story within an hour after posting. And no one would ever know! I could just mass-email them and POOF! Instant huge ratings!
The minimum numbers should be set a bit higher to make such manipulation much more difficult.
I'm really liking this! I don't have anything to say about this chapter, but I figured I might as well leave a postive comment...I need to start leaving them more often.
this is pretty good.
also, I'm calling it:
Mrs Cake is actually a dragon!
followin'
2297118 Ah, what indeed.
2297153 I won't say if she's pregnant, but this story IS set before the Cake twins are born. They were born about halfway through the second season, I think. I probably should have said something about that in the author's notes. Anyway, thanks for reading!
2297189 I'm glad you think so! I like hearing good things about my writing style. Also thanks for reading
2297640 Wouldn't want the eight seconds I spent on that joke to go to waste.
2298415 As Mr. Torgue would say, "YOUR KIND WORDS ARE APPRECIATED!"
2297153
that's also what I think!
She has some weird cravings though
Turns out she was a changling all along.. Cmon.. I want to see more of this mind of yours.
OH! Mystery, drama and a great dream sequence!
I like it so far.
Celestia and Luna, I hope she IS a changeling!
Keep up the good work!
2298903 I won't say if she is or is not, but i'm happy that you are interested!
2298932 Hey, I would have been more angry if you spoiled it
Patience is a virtue after all. I will wait happily!
First, define the problem: Wife may be a bug. Next, list recourses: Report to Twilight Sparkle, search for evidence, ask outright, end query. What do?
2299016 "Um...panic?"
2299019 It's a well-known fact that changelings have a weakness to Paul Simon. If Carrot just starts singing Graceland, she'll be forced to turn back to her true form, and if not, he's getting some tonight!
2299033 It's funny that you mention singing. There is a joke later in the story about how terrible Carrot sings.
>WIFE PREGGERS
>MUST BE CHANGELING
~AdviceCarrot
2299127 CLEARLY THE ONLY LOGICAL SOLUTION!
hey, are you ok with me doing a blind reading of this for youtube
Goddamnit Pinkie. Just.... Goddamnit. Way to play on the side of the other team.
Actually now that I think of it, I don't think the twins have been mentioned in the story yet, so totally calling "I'm pregnant". It would also handily explain magically getting both a pegasus and a unicorn from a pair of earth pony parents from traditionally earth pony families.
2297153 I think your right it could explain her increased desire for sweets.
Wife's got a bun in the oven there, Carrot.
I know you are afraid of the future but pretending she's a changeling isn't going to help.
You would think Cupcake would lose some pounds with the ability to transform
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inb4 she's pregant.
Had come.
Lay.
These two sentences need to be separated by a space.
Based.
2300353 Thanks for taking the time to read through this. I look over everything several times before submitting it but, well, you know how it is. I always miss something. Or uh, four somethings.
Anyway, thanks again
2300209 That image made me smile. A golden star for you, sir.
2300199 It's funny that Carrot Cake hasn't thought of that yet.
2299857 Yeah, and she might also be pregnant!
2300199
Blasphemy! That just means there is more of her to love.
2299476 Hey, go right ahead! I'm flattered that you'd want to.
2300485 I'm all for more cushin for the pushin, but when she has more girth then her husband that's going a little overboard
Ok, this has the potiential to be a good story but in my opinion Mr. Cake jumped to conclusions way too quickly. I mean, yeah it would have been okay to be paranoid and suspicious but he just straight freaked out over the slightest things after reading the book, I think you can admit that's a tad jumpy, wouldn't you say?
2300485 2300520 This seemed appropriate to make
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2300494 oki doki loki thx
2300472
Oh you.
This seems pretty fun so far I can't wait for the second part. also I know it was meant as a cuddly ending but for me it was definitely a cuddly cliffhanger.
I have some ideas about what the ending might be but I guess I will just have to wait and see.