Life is art. At least, that's what Soarin's always heard. He's never been one for appreciating the beauty of a masterpiece. Flying has always been all that he's ever needed. But, after an accident leaves him unable to fly, he may give the topic a little more thought.
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This was interesting. I want to see where this goes. Your take on Photo Finish is a neat idea.
Seems like the poetry will play a fairly large part, so I say change it.
Wait, it is finished!?
REALLY?! NO!!! The romance! Where is the deeper connecting romance. I admit the Cinderella reference adds a cute and very first step about their romance but really, WHERE IS the Romance!?
2377479 Ever so faintly there. I admit, it could use more. But as I said, I needed this to be finished.
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Oh well, I'm just a reader and not the author of this work, still a nice touch. Here's hoping you get back to this in the future.
2378160 Indeed.
Effective, and pretty sweet at the same time.