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Bolt Magnet


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I realize what the saying actually means, but is it bad that the first thing I thought of when reading this story's title was this?

Dashes panties and slipped her middle finger inside her.

turned me on

Meh humanized ponies...

“Oh, darlin’, why do you need pictures when you have the real thing?” She whispered as she slid her right hand down Dashes panties and slipped her middle finger inside her.

I understand the thumbs down now. that degenerated quickkkkkkkly. I mean it was slightly amusing until it got all cheesy porny. Come on, surely you can make a porn scene more seamless than that.

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Evidently not. This was just something I threw together for shits and giggles.
If ya like it, ya like it. If ya don't ya don't. Either way, thanks for stopping by.

omg that is gross but awsome:eeyup: rd+aj=:heart::ajkiss::rainbowkiss:

Comment posted by Quill Plus Ink deleted Mar 13th, 2013

Wow rainbow, sitting around in a moonlit room out on acreage at precisely 10:57. Get the hell out of my room

can we pleez has more?
:twilightblush: pleez?

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Perhaps... I kinda have a couple of different ideas that take place in my Humanized universe. The only problem with that is, most of my ideas are too short to facilitate an independent story, or alternatively, there isn't enough substance to justify them at all.

But in any care, I'll think about it.

I see what's coming(I made a funny!!!)


:applejackconfused::rainbowkiss:

Awesome my Bolt! Really good. Though I REAAAAALLY wonder now, why every appledash pic and fic I see that think about or actually include a 3rd pony, there's a 75% possibility is Twi. What's with AppleDashLight shipping?

Been there, done that. But I wasn't on facebook mind you!

This was a short and kind of sweet story. I kind of wished there was more to it but, oh well.

I was expecting her to be rubbing one out over cartoon horses.

It needs a bit of editing, and a quick spellcheck certainly wouldn't hurt, but I like this so far! :pinkiehappy:

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Yeah, that was pretty horrendous wasn't it? I haven't actually read this story since I uploaded it, but I went and fixed up everything that looked wrong. In any case, cheers for the comment. Any and all criticism is welcome.

I didn't even realise this was incomplete, nice update though. Worth that wait :pinkiehappy:

Man jelly???
HA!! Agh, now this gave me chuckles.

Where did the second chapter go? Is it being re-written? If so can it be posted soon along with some other chapters? I was enjoying re-reading this and would love to read more! :pinkiehappy:

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